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This, when Mitsunari joins the fray...
Giant Lord Squeak Ieyasu is not amused đ
(tried manga style)
âPeople donât understand the word ruthless. They think it means âmean.â Itâs not about being mean. Itâs about seeing the bright, clear line that leads from A to B. The line that goes from motive to means. Beginning to end. Itâs about seeing that bright, clear line and not caring about anything but the beautiful fact that you can see the solution. Not caring about anything else but the perfection of it.â
â Marco, Animorphs #30: The Reunion, pg. 71 (by K.A. Applegate)
Hiding information from your readers on purpose will help you create tension in your novel. I know this doesnât work for every novel, but if youâre writing something with elements of suspense and mystery, hiding details and revealing them later will improve your story. This also helps add dimensions to your characters and explore their motivations on a deeper level.
Here are a few things to hide about your characters to create tension:
Whether or not your protagonist is lying
Even good characters lie, especially if they feel like it will protect other people in the long run. There are ways to hint that your character is hiding the truth without actually revealing what the truth is. If your protagonist gets nervous or changes the subject when theyâre asked about a specific detail, this will help show your readers that something isnât quite right. If your characterâs deception is hidden and then revealed at the right time, youâll be able to add exciting tension and shock value to your story.
Who the real villain is
Some of the best tension is created when weâre uncertain about who the real villain is. In mystery/crime novels, for example, thereâs often evidence that points to one person who ends up not really being the one we need to worry about. If you hide this information from your readers, you keep them guessing throughout the course of your novel and this will aid in creating suspense.
The truth about their past
When you hide your characterâs past from your readers, you have the ability to use it as an explanation for something important later on. For example, if you character has these mysterious powers they canât explain, you can use their parents and back story in order to reveal later on why itâs happening. Revealing past details slowly over the course of your novel helps build the mystery.
What their secondary goals are
Sometimes characters will have goals no one else knows about but them OR they will have a false goal that their using to cover up their real goal. For example, a character might say theyâre rescuing another character because they want to help, but it really might be all about finding some hidden treasure along the way. There are many reasons why a character might want to hide their goals. Explore character motivations on a deeper level and youâll be able to realistically include this type of deception in your story.
-Kris NoelÂ
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This one, @otome-reviews , if Kyo ES had added some suspense elements just like this and IF only the story is focused more on Kyo and Hide side of things. That would have been an exciting read...and the main conflict would have been like: can they trust Hideyoshi if Kyo and MC put themselves on the same camp as him? I bet this was the reason why Kyo wasn't so enthusiastic with Hide's proposal in the first place.
Haha, this is just my speculative--what-if scenario (plus, I saw what "Dark Lord" Hide could do in Kojuro Act 2).
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Do remember that Kyo is really careful with his thief identity (he is a former ninja after all) and the only time Kyoâs identity was suspected by Nobunaga was AFTER Hideyoshi found him on the storehouse (at least in this ES. I still havenât done his MS, sorry). MC nor Suke wouldnât dare to let something slip about Kyoâs âother lifeâ, perhaps Hide wouldnât unless he had a good reasonâŠ
âŠlike using Kyo to ruin those monks to aid Nobunaga. But since the story implied Kyo refused that first offer (when Kyo busted the empty storehouse). Hide might have thought of a way to get Kyo in his plans, like slipping some rumors that Kyoichiro might be Ishikawa Goemon to get Nobunaga to act, thus entrapping Kyo in Kiyosu to make the cotton merchant at severe disadvantage.
âif something should happened outside while you are in here, you will be proven innocentâ (-which also means âif nothing happens outside while you are here, you are guiltyâ-).
Sakuya went to Kyoâs house and saw MC and judging by their conversation, Sakuya didnât expect MC to be there (or at least didnât expect that Kyoâs âmistressâ was the fugitive Tsuki MC). I was led to think Saku went to Kyoâs house to assassinate MC but I believe it wasnât the caseâŠSo what was Saku doing in Kyo'shouse? Gathering evidence? Maybe. But we do not get to know his REAL reason being there because Hide intervened in an epic fashion.
Hideyoshi is not simple. He plans âtwo steps aheadâ as Kyoichiro would put it. Hide might have âslippedâ into Nobunaga about Kyo, he doesnât want him dead. While Nobunaga was busy with his entrapment scheme, Hide anticipated Nobuâs methods. He prevented Sakuya from killing MC (or rather he stopped him from gathering evidence against Kyo) with his âpresenceâ since Sakuya is supposedly a secret Oda ninja, therefore he canât act recklessly under Hideyoshiâs watch.
In Kyoâs pov, Hide used his weirdness and fixation to Kyoâs crane to get him to give one to him, not because he want it to be a signal to MC about his predicament in Kiyosu. But in reality, Hide used it as a tool to get MC to act by being the supposed thief and steal something to clear Kyoâs name.
So, Hideyoshi became Kyoâs benefactor and became indebted to him. Because of this, Kyo ruined those corrupt monks which he would otherwise refuse to do under normal circumstances.
Kyo must have got a sense of Hideâs motives as he forged the aliance with him not out of gratitude but only because he âdoes not want to be on Hideyoshiâs bad sideâ. And that statement, tells us something just how far and how âdeepâ HIDEYOSHI would go to achieve his goals.
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Hideyoshi and cute
Ok let it never be said that you donât know what you want. ;)
âPick one.â
Hideyoshi hands you a box, small and cute and ribbon-bound but unmistakable, a gilded logo winking atop from the chocolate shop youâd mentioned was the thing you missed most about your hometown. The plaza is busy, shoppers milling about and the faint strains of carols slipping out of the warm shops each time one of the doors opens up, but there is a bit of peace in the shade of the towering crown jewel of the enormous Christmas tree, and the twinkle of the tree lights behind you is mirrored in his mischievous grin.
Bemused, you ease the top open, only to blink at the single truffle nestled carefully in tissue within. âThere is only one,â you say, confusion wrinkling your brow as you reach in to lift it out.
âExactly.â Hideyoshi laughs, only it sounds a bit off, and you realize when you blink up from the chocolate in your palm that its because heâs kneeling before you. âJust likeâŠthereâs only one woman I love, and only one woman for me.â He takes the box from your nerveless fingers and pulls out the ring that had been hiding beneath the sweet. âI know you have countless choices out thereâŠbut Iâm hoping that youâll say thereâs only one for you too.â
He holds the ring out, and its only because it catches the shimmer of the tree that you can see how his hand trembles, as if it bears the weight of ever so much more than a bit of gold and gem. âMarry me?â he asks, in a voice that shakes ever so slightly too, and you realize itâs the only time youâve ever heard him sound unsure.
âYes, yes, of course!â you say, or at least you think you say. It doesnât matter much because the next moment your arms are around him and his lips are on yours, hot and fervent. Somewhere in the dizzying gasp of it, you realize the chocolate has slipped from your grasp to fall on the groundâŠbut it doesnât even matter. How could it, when these kisses, and the promise of a lifetime of them, are sweeter than any confection ever could be?