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writing smut depends on each person's writing style but i think there's something so gut-wrenchingly beautiful about smut when it's not very graphic and vivid. like., would this turn on a reader more?
"he kissed her, pulling her body closer to him."
or this?
"His lips felt so familiar it hurt her heart. His breathing had become more strained; his muscles tensed. She let herself sink into his embrace as his hands flattened against her spine. He drew her closer."
One may like either the top or the bottom one better, but it totally depends on your writing to make it work. Neither is bad, but the second example is more flattering, talking literally.
express one's sensory feelings, and the readers will automatically know what's happening.
writing, "her walls clenched against him, her breath hitching with his every thrust" is better than writing, "she was about to cum".
are some vocabulary you can introduce in your writing:
whimpered, breathed lightly, stuttered, groaned, grunted, yearned, whined, ached, clenched, coaxed, cried out, heaved, hissed
shivering, shuddering, curling up against one's body
swallowing, panting, sucking in a sharp breath, thrusting, moving gently, gripped, biting,
nibbling, tugging, pressing, touching, licking, flicking,
wet kisses, brushing soft kisses across their body (yk where), licking, sucking, teasing, tracing, tickling, bucking hips, forcing one on their knees
holding hips, guiding the one on top, moving aimlessly, mindlessly, sounds they make turn insanely beautiful, sinful to listen to
he sighed with pleasure
her skin flushed
he planted kisses along her jawline
her lips turned red, messy, kissed.
his hands were on his hair, pulling him.
light touches traveled down his back
he arched his back, his breath shuddering
her legs parted, sinking into the other's body, encircling around their waist.
sources to refer to for more: (will be updated soon!)
Deleted Scene from Vikings S5: Freydis mourns her son Baldur
EMILY CAREY as ALICENT HIGHTOWER in HOUSE OF THE DRAGON ↳ 1.05 - “We Light The Way”
When I stepped into the fire, my own people thought I was mad. But when the fire burnt out, I was unhurt: the Mother of Dragons. Do you understand? I’m no ordinary woman. My dreams come true.
DAENERYS TARGARYEN IN GAME OF THRONES: SEASON TWO (2012)
EMMA D’ARCY as RHAENYRA TARGARYEN HOUSE OF THE DRAGON (2022) — Season One
There were more dragons than ever before as well, and several of the she-dragons were regularly producing clutches of eggs. Not all of these eggs hatched, but many did, and it became customary for the fathers and mothers of newborn princelings to place a dragon’s egg in their cradles, following a tradition that Princess Rhaena had begun many years before; the children so blessed invariably bonded with the hatchlings to become dragonriders. –Fire and Blood
1. Tone Words: Use tone words to convey the emotional quality of a voice. For example, you can describe a voice as "melodic," "soothing," "sharp," "gentle," or "commanding" to give readers a sense of the tone.
2. Pitch and Range: Mention the pitch and range of the voice. Is it "deep," "high-pitched," "raspy," or "full-bodied"? This can provide insight into the character's age, gender, or emotional state.
3. Accent and Diction: Describe the character's accent or diction briefly to give a sense of their background or cultural influences. For instance, "British-accented," "Southern drawl," or "formal."
4. Volume: Mention the volume of the voice, whether it's "whispering," "booming," "murmuring," or "hushed."
5. Quality: Use terms like "velvet," "silken," "gravelly," "honeyed," or "crisp" to convey the texture or quality of the voice.
6. Rate of Speech: Describe how fast or slow the character speaks, using words like "rapid," "slurred," "measured," or "rambling."
7. Mood or Emotion: Indicate the mood or emotion carried by the voice. For example, a "quivering" voice may convey fear or anxiety, while a "warm" voice may express comfort and reassurance.
8. Resonance: Describe the resonance of the voice, such as "echoing," "nasal," "booming," or "tinny."
9. Timbre: Mention the timbre of the voice, using words like "rich," "thin," "clear," or "smoky."
10. Cadence: Highlight the rhythm or cadence of speech with descriptors like "staccato," "lilting," "rhythmic," or "halting."
11. Intonation: Convey the character's intonation by saying their voice is "sarcastic," "apologetic," "confident," or "questioning."
12. Vocal Characteristics: If applicable, mention unique vocal characteristics, like a "lisp," "stutter," "drawl," or "accented 'r'."
ELIZA DUSHKU as Gina City by the Sea (2002) dir. Michael Caton-Jones
Rosamund Pike as Jane Bennet in Pride & Prejudice (2005) dir. Joe Wright
EMILIA CLARKE as DAENERYS TARGARYEN in GAME OF THRONES ↳ 5.01 - "The Wars to Come"