Cómo presentaríamos este canto en un programa musical?...
La naturaleza humana está siempre envuelta en el amor. Su existencia o su carencia, su llenura o su vacío, su normalidad o complejidad, su egoísmo o apertura, su querer ser o no ser dependiendo del sentimiento que os llene, y cómo el ser humano expresará este sentimiento en líricas que revelan contenidos de amor o ilusiones... Ana Gabriel... Simplemente Amigos.
can you give tips on how to change up character dialogue? all of my characters end up sounding the same and i'm not sure how to fix it
When it comes to writing fiction, creating unique and believable characters is absolutely essential. One important aspect of character development is crafting unique voices that reflect each character’s personality and background.
Before you can write distinct voices for your characters, it’s important to understand who they are. Building out a solid foundation and developing compelling backstories is one of the best ways to ensure they always have unique voices. Here are some tips for getting to know your characters:
Write character sketches that detail their backgrounds, personalities, goals, and motivations.
Conduct interviews with your characters as if they were real people, asking them about their likes and dislikes, fears, goals, and more (the Proust questionnaire is a popular way to do this).
Imagine how your characters’ past experiences will change how they speak in different situations and when experiencing varied emotions.
Descriptions can be just as important as dialogue when it comes to creating character voices. Here are some tips for using descriptions to enhance your characters’ personalities:
Use specific details to create vivid descriptions of each character’s body language, mannerisms, and behaviour.
Consider how each character’s mannerisms might influence their speech patterns. For example, a character who is shy might be hesitant to speak or repeat themselves frequently.
Pay attention to how your characters interact with their environment. Do they use their hands a lot when they speak? Do they pace around the room or sit still?
Use sensory details to create immersion. For example, a character who is nervous might sweat profusely or fidget with their jewellery.
When writing unique voices for characters, it’s important to avoid falling back on stereotypes or clichés. Here are some tips for creating characters that feel fresh and authentic:
Avoid using dialects or accents. Not only do these often rely on stereotypes, but they also break reader immersion unless authenticity is absolutely essential to the type of book you are writing.
Consider how each character’s background and experiences might influence their beliefs and values. One-dimensional characters built on clichés won’t have unique voices.
Think outside of the box when it comes to creating distinct voices. Instead of relying on traditional archetypes, consider combining traits from multiple sources to create something new.
With the basics in place, how do we convert unique character voices into dialogue? Here are some tips for writing dialogue that feels authentic and unique to each character:
Read your dialogue out loud to hear how it sounds, and make sure it’s true to how you imagine your character to be.
Give your characters a unique conversational quirk that feels natural. An example could be that they call everyone “love.”
Vary the length and complexity of sentences to reflect each character’s personality and background.
Consider how each character’s education and experiences might influence their vocabulary and sentence structure.
Use dialogue tags sparingly to avoid detracting from the actual words being spoken.
Avoid using too much exposition or explaining too much in dialogue. Instead, let the characters speak when it serves your story.
By understanding your characters, crafting unique dialogue, using descriptions to enhance character voices, and avoiding stereotypes and clichés, you can create vibrant, engaging characters that will keep readers hooked from start to finish.
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P
Pain of my life
Panic at the Laundromat
Paper cuts
Paper hearts (easy to tear)
Past mistakes
Peer-pressured
People we met in supermarkets
People will talk (no matter what)
Perfect moment to forget
Perfect little angel
Perhaps someday
Pest control
Pillow talk
Pinky promises
Playing favourites
Pocket full of sorrow
Pour me a drink (or two or more)
Power of kisses
Praying to her body
Pressed flowers and love letters
Pretty little lies
Pride and Problems
Primal Instinct
Promises made, promises kept
Pushing boundaries
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
Q
Qualifications to kick ass
Qualified answers to unqualified questions
Quality content
Quantity over quality
Questionable taste
Questioning the status quo
Quarantine with the enemy
Quarrels over nothing
Quintessentially the two of us
Quiet nights together
Quite a spectacle
Quite the catch
Quick decisions
Quoting the classics
Queen of messing up
Queendom comes
Quests and how to avoid them
Quickening the appetite
Quivering (keep me warm)
Quivering with emotions
Questionnaire for a partner
Quitting unhealthy habits
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R
Rain clouds over your head
Rain on our parade
Rainy days at the sea
Raw power
Ready for whatever
Real people, real problems
Reality check
Reality comes back for you
Rebellion in her blood
Religious experience
Reputation to uphold
Rescue’s on the way
Reunions (and how to avoid them)
Reunited with my love
Rights and wrongs
Rising to the top (where we belong)
Romance is not dead (yet)
Rose-tinted glasses
Rosy dreams
Royal pain in the ass
Ruby eyes
Ruin me (please)
Ruins of us
Rules of friends-with-benefits
Ruling over her kingdom
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Oh Ms Beautiful Ms Beautiful
Oh Ms Beautiful, Ms Beautiful
How many times have you fallen into the same spot?
Implementing strategies, you think they are right
And some others, mistakenly understood, your purpose and the right
Be brave! Be brave
Only heroes in their own characters stand the weight
And the purpose of your own inside the mess
Fight, the fight for you
For your principles
For your career
Fight, the good fight
But do not let them win the fight
Of liberating a mind, in a conflicted spot
Of a broken mind
CHIO SULAIKA Me gustaba tener la amistad de Chio Sulaika. Disfrutaba de su presencia. Chio era un reto a la imaginacion y a la ley del esfuerzo por ampliar horizontes musicales, y constantes esfuerzos de superacion personal en su arte. Graduado en el Conservatorio de Viena en Austria, con una beca nacional del Gobierno Mexicano atraves de CONACULTA, Sulaika regresa al Estado de Coahuila, donde poco despues se hace Director de la Escuela de Musica. Ese dia me invita a seguir la juerga cultural en el Teatro de La Ciudad donde la Orquesta Sinfonica del Estado tendria su presentacion anual y accedi. Ver treinta personas en el podium, de diferentes edades, con diferentes instrumentos es realmente un espectaculo sinigual. Ver al Gobernador del Estado, al Secretario de Educacion, a los profesores de Primarias y Secundarias y nivel medio entre la farandula, otorga un toque de esplendor al evento. Un palabras de Chio a mi oido durante la presentacion de la "Tocata y Fuga en Re Menor" de Bach, causan mi curiosidad y hacen la nota del dia: "Escucha lo desafinado de los violines y los contrabajos". Palabras benditas, en manos de un periodista porque a partir de ahi ardio Troya en la ciudad. La nota salio al dia siguiente a ocho columnas "Desafinado, el Orgullo Cultural de la Ciudad". Fuentes extraoficiales que pidieron no ser identificadas declararon que la presentacion de la Orquesta Sinfonica del Estado carecio de lo sustancial de todo evento: la afinacion. El orgullo cultural, la maxima excelsitud musical del Estado, la belleza musical que representa a un gobierno y sus gentes, no logra tan siquiera sonar armonica durante la presentacion, y aun asi el Gobernador del Estado aplaudio con beneplacito la presentacion. Brrrrrmmm, cae Troya. A la manana siguiente, la llamada del Secretario de Eduacion, aduciendo que si existia algo personal a lo cual el Director del periodico solo adujo: "lo unico que puedo hacer es que tenga una conversacion con el periodista, lo cual agradeci grandemente al jefe, por el respeto a un trabajo periodistico. Directores de musica que habian venido a la presentacion empiezan a hablar, el director de la Orquesta Sinfonica de la Ciudad de Mexico concede entrevista, le sigue lloviendo duro y tupido...
World Building
Creating Land
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⥇ agriculture
⟿ what is grown in abundance? how common is farmland? where is the farmland?
⥇ architecture
⟿ what kind of buildings? how tall/spacious? what are they made of? how well made? how well planned?
⥇ animals
⟿ what wild animals are lurking in the area? hunting? any animals affecting the livestock or agriculture?
⥇ biomes
⟿ desert? tundra? grassland? forest? savanna?
⥇ bodies of water
⟿ seas? lake? ponds? rivers? fresh water/salt water? fishing? keep in mind, settlements are often built near bodies of water
⥇ climate
⟿ dry? rainy? temperate? tropical? polar? how have people adjusted to this climate?
⥇ elevation
⟿ altitude? how does the altitude affect lifestyle?
⥇ geology
⟿ rocky? types of rocks?
⥇ landforms
⟿ mountains? valleys? plateaus? plains? hills? glaciers? peninsulas? volcanos? canyons?
⥇ latitude / longitude
⟿ location on planet? how does it affect other elements of land?
⥇ livestock
⟿ common domesticated animals? common animal usages?
⥇ minerals
⟿ any valuable minerals / metals? are they mined regularly? how are they used?
⥇ natural disasters
⟿ earthquake? tornado? volcano? duststorm? flood? hurricane? tsunami? how often do these occur? protocols?
⥇ population
⟿ how many people? how dense is the population? how does the population affect surrounding nature?
⥇ resources
⟿ what is abundant? scarce? how are they used? how available are they?
⥇ sacred land
⟿ religiously important land? historical importance? widely accepted as sacred? how is it honored?
⥇ soil
⟿ good or bad for vegetation? rocky?
⥇ tectonic activity
⟿ earthquake frequency? volcano frequency? trenches?
⥇ topography
⟿ how common are maps? how accurate? how long have they been around? who makes them?
⥇ vegetation
⟿ what is abundant? scarce? what grows easily? with difficulty? what is commonly foraged? who forages? plant types? tree types?
2.-Seems to me you are thinking in a broader audience, and it knock my head “Why not"?”. Why should you submit your writings into a reduced web space, when you can think in a broader audience, so that is a yes.
3.- I’m not afraid to go that road. I got no fear to go into that road. I got no lack mentality in the sense that I’m not able to do it in an awesome way. I’m confident in that respect, and I know that I can kick some ass
4.- The problem is going into the web where you don’t know, who is evaluating what, under what rules, who are the participants, who are the judges. Judges dressed in the web as bartenders, or drunken people, or people that do not really know about writing stories?
Secondly, it seems to me that writing sometimes is related to a culture, and every culture is different. “Ciudades Desiertas” de Enrique Aviles Fabila has that concept, a Mexican looking into the American culture, and taking a look at the USA from his perspective that he call those cities “Ciudades Desiertas”, y después miras a Ernest Hemingway “For whom the Bells Tolls” and there you see a gringo looking at the Spanish culture, in a very deep social transformation.
What does that means? Who is going to judge, under what rules, under what concept? and good luck there!
However, if there is a real one chance, like hispanic literature with hispanic judges, there might be a chance.
Why?
Because those perspectives varies depending on the culture, as I proved in the paragraph above. And talking about culture, “women” are not seen seemingly the same in the American culture than in the Mexican culture. In the Mexican culture, women are a token, vital icon of society expecting to have some roles into the family that varies differently from the American society, more liberated, and mixed in the supposedly “equality gender”. (And man arrested for supposedly beat a wife with no evidence, but for the sake of this night, let’s put him in jail. Child support for the husband in a cheating wife? What the heck? ) Those issues might be a wonderful topic to explore. Are we in an equal society in every aspect of life?
“One thousand And One Night with Miss Beautiful” still has some doubts about that role, between the Mexican and the American way of life.
5.- To submit, an article, into a web site, where there is a lack of rules, clear rules, real names, leads into fake polls, that’s why I have been insisting into going real, because real, counts, and there is no cheating audiences, no cheating surveys, no cheating counts, etc etc etc. (Do you agree with me?, do I lie in that sense?)
6.- On this end of the rope, there’s a man trying to go for a line of honor and respect doing wonderful things with my own hands, and I said “wonderful” because my hands and my body and my soul are connected into creating wonderful never seen, nor done, nor expected things (I said trying becauseI don't do things perfectly all the time); and on the other side of the rope, cheating games, fake people, fake statistics responding in a cheated way to a man that is giving the opposite, the best?
7.- P.D : I never work against me. My strengths I develop more, and my other skills are my strengths in a developing circle. We are humans, not binary human beings as computers going for yes as “1″, and “no” for 0. We are only humans, not R2D2 lifting the hand according to a command “1″, and “0″ for No (Do not do it!) We are humans may friend!
Hey and DO NOT DO those #$%^&^ ID’s. I HATE them! Me caen USURA! (Mexican slang referring to the most hated issue, in a mouth of a well being raised highly educated human being of the Mexican upper class).
* Ms Therapist? Can we go for a session into how I started to hate fake ID?
One of the greatest moments in life a human being can find, is when a beautiful mind surpasses a formal education. It's up to the human being to discover his purpose in life, outside the limits of a formal education. Talent, thinking outside the box, creativity, challenging minds, putting together all the dots in our lives might create a new product, a new service, a new idea. Steve Jobs, in this wonderful speech at the Stanford University, shows how a human being should trust his/her own instincts and path in life, to think outside the limits of a square education, without stating that is not valuable.
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