Words To Replace Said, Except This Actually Helps

Everyday of my god damn life

anyone else feel like their trauma isn’t bad enough n they’re probably just overreacting to normal childhood experiences? same

From @lexi-dermain 

To: @headfrst4halos

Okay so it said I could choose between any combination of daniel, Armand, lestat and Louis so I chose daniel and Armand sense they are my comfort characters. I was also able to choose between night island and current for timing, I chose night island becouse it meant human daniel was okay. Then as you can tell I drew them ice skating! Because I just thought it would be cute. i do really actually like how it turned out. I still want to add a few finishing touches but for now it’s nice. P.s. sorry I submitted for checkins late, I had to do something with my family

Looks like it's questioning my life time! Woo!

Still talked than me :)

oh Also apparently i’m 5’7, not 5’9 like i thought (‘:

Send me a number

Send me a number and I’ll answer it ^^

1: How old are you? 2: When’s your birthday? 3: Do you have any strange phobias? 4: What’s the last text you sent? 5: What does your latest text message from someone else say? 6: Do you sleep with or without clothes on? 7: Do you have any strange phobias? 8: Put your Spotify on shuffle. What’s the first 6 songs that pop up? 9: What was the last lie you told? 10: What does your URL mean? 11: Who is your celebrity crush? 12: Have you ever gone skinny dipping? 13: How do you vent your anger? 14: Are you happy with the person you’ve become? 15: Stick your right arm out; what do you touch first? Do the same with your left arm. 16: Most attractive singer of your opposite gender? 17: What’s the weather like right now? 18: What time is it? 19: Do you drive? If so, have you ever crashed? 20: Do you like the smell of gasoline? 21: Do you have any nicknames? 22: What was the last film you saw? 23: What’s the worst injury you’ve ever had? 24: Do you have any obsessions right now? 25: What’s your sexual orientation? 26: What is your usual bedtime? 27: Do you tend to hold grudges against people who have done you wrong? 28: What is your astrological sign? 29: Do you save money or spend it? 30: Can you do a split? 31: In a relationship? 32: How many relationships have you had? 33: Can you touch your nose with your tongue? 34: Where were you yesterday? 35: Do you have a best friend? 36: What were you doing last night at 12AM? 37: Are you the kind of friend you would want to have as a friend? 38: What’s a song that always makes you happy when you hear it? 39: What size shoes do you wear? 40: How tall are you? 41: What is your favourite word? 42: What’s the last song you listened to? 43: Basic question; what’s your favourite colour/colours? 44: What would be a question you’d be afraid to tell the truth on? 45: You just got a free plane ticket to anywhere. You have to depart right now. Where are you gonna go? 46: Do you have any piercings/tattoos? And do you want any? 47: How many languages do you speak? 48: How many countries have you been to? 49: Which swear word do you use the most? 50: _____ or _____

• your aloud to be passionate about a dumb story

writers:

break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared

fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re referring to yet, it’s a-okay to refer to them by an identifying trait)

blunette is not a thing

new speaker, new paragraph. please.

“said” is such a great word. use it. make sweet love to it. but don’t kill it

use “said” more than you use synonyms for it. that way the use of synonyms gets more exciting. getting a sudden description of how a character is saying something (screaming, mumbling, sighing) is more interesting that way.

if your summary says “I suck at summaries” or “story better than summary” you’re turning off the reader, my dude. your summary is supposed to be your hook. you gotta own it, just like you’re gonna own the story they’re about to read

follow long sentences w short ones and short ones w long ones. same goes for paragraphs

your writing is always better than you think it is. you just think it’s bad because the story’s always gonna be predicable to the one who’s writing it

i love u guys keep on trucking

- July 10, 1912

- The diaries of Franz Kafka, travel diaries

[ID: July 10. Sprained my ankle. Pain. End ID]

im scared.

I'm the wooden floor that dosent know how to comfort people :)

I like the art and the caption.

 No We Will Not Get Over Nicki! Hes My Favoret Vampire ...

Scene from “The Vampire Lestat” where he visited theatre once again but this time as a vampire. And met Nicolas de Lenfent. 

*Sob*  Everything about this character is rather depressively sad but yet so little words about his thoughts. I’ll never get through my grief about Nicolas. Why in the hell am I reading this book again? Why it ended up this bad for Nicolas? May be this time I’ll be able to find the real answer. (but I suspect life of Nicolas could be… less doomed if Lestat wasn’t both selfish and good-hearted)