Writing Advice For Characters With A Missing Eye: Dear God Does Losing An Eyes Function Fuck Up Your

writing advice for characters with a missing eye: dear God does losing an eyes function fuck up your neck. Ever since mine crapped out I've been slowly and unconsciously shifting towards holding my head at an angle to put the good eye closer to the center. and human necks. are not meant to accommodate that sorta thing.

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4 months ago

Tokyo debunker spoilers up to EP. 5 ish (far as I am right now)

So! That traitor Taiga was talking about. I have some theories. Of course, it's only been a chapter since I heard about the traitor, so it's probably all horribly wrong, but they are theories.

I'm bad at mapping out my thoughts, so let's start with who I think WOULD be the traitor, then narrow down who COULD be the traitor.

Actually, first I wanna ask what the hell traitor means *exactly.* (How to do italics on Tumblr still eludes me)

I'm going purely off memory here, though I did the chapter maybe the day before yesterday so it should be fresh on my mind, but I don't believe Taiga specified literally anything about what he means when he says Traitor. Whether he means a traitor to the school, the ghouls, or all of humankind, we don't know. (Or at the very least I don't right now.)

There's only two things that seem clear to me. (Besides them being a Ghoul.) One is that, whatever they're a traitor to, it's quite significant. Taiga seems entirely unbothered about burning down everything he's worked for after all, as if he thinks it's going to happen anyway.

Two is that, and take this with a grain of salt because it might just be conjecture, MC already knew the traitor by the time she had that "conversation" with Taiga. Though this is taken entirely from his phrasing of "keep letting him fool you".

So who *would* be the traitor? Out of everyone in the game I've met so far, not many of them come to mind. Well, that might be a lie.

In Frostheim I can only think of Thoma. (I'm like 80% sure that was his name.) Kaito and Luca seem too good natured, despite Kaito's cowardice and Luca's eagerness. Jin doesn't seem concerned enough with... Well, anything, to be a traitor. He gave away a yacht, for Christ's sake. What kind of Traitor does that for someone they met like a month ago??

Thoma on the other hand seems to fit the bill almost entirely. He's calculated, doesn't share his thoughts much, has a connection with someone high up, seems loyal enough, fits the bill almost entirely. Hell, he even has late-night rendezvous with someone (a convicted murderer no less) from an "opposing" dorm. The only real problem seems to be that his schedule is filled.

That, and the fact that I have yet to see any real reason or reasoning for him being the traitor. Circumstantial "evidence" doesn't exactly make a completely sound accusation, after all. Traitors seem like that because they're advisors, not the other way around. Cause and effect, right?

What about Vagastrom? The only one I can't see as a possibility is Sho, I mean what kind of Traitor goes back on his friends scheme to help someone he barely knows get a lesser reprimand?

Alan is already suspicious, as much as I love his character. I mean he literally killed a guy, (who is somehow still very much alive,) and is, again, having nightly rendezvous with someone from an enemy dorm. AND HIS DORM RUNS A FIGHT CLUB, I mean c'mon dude. Besides that, however, (and his clear bloodlust,) his, yk, general disposition, seems to suggest otherwise. Not sure about him.

Leo, however? Oh he would absolutely be the traitor. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm fairly certain he spread the Frostheim rumours, though it's been a few days since I read that episode. Plus the spying/eavesdropping, antagonizing Alan, hearing that Vice Captain would need to be nice to MC and immediately trying to rob her of all credibility, that scheme in general, antagonizing Subaru, and most of all, suggesting that Alan let Takeru kill the Honor Student just cuz.

Or I have a theory he might be Sho's demon, but that has very little support and is kinda a reach.

Problem is with Leo being the traitor; he's too obvious about it??? He's bitchy even to his friend, he seems to regularly tell MC to come to Vagastrom with no explanation for the express reason of eavesdropping on his Captain, he antagonizes people left and right, (Alan and Subaru,) and outright suggests complacency in murder? The intent purpose of a traitor is to be trustworthy. Leo might just be your run-of-the-mill jackass. Ashamed to share a birthday with him. (Also he's not a fucking Gemini, he's a Taurus, I would know I LOOKED AT THE CONSTELLATIONS-)

Ahem. Anyway, what about Jabberwock?

Ren is a first year who, honestly, doesn't seem to give enough of a damn about the school to be a traitor in any right. He's also clearly not cold enough to be a traitor, he all saw him with Calamari. That boy's just tired.

Towa... Not entirely sure what his deal is yet, but like. "What are you doing, Dandelion?" "Hm... I'll go ask Haru if it's okay." "Do you need help, Dandelion?" "Okay, I'll save you." "Dandelion. What should I do next?" "What do you need, Dandelion? Tell me." "I'm strong enough. Why won't you ask me to do it?"

He's like Floyd if Floyd didn't resort to violence, was actually a good person, and was far more mellow. He's like a lanky, flower eating puppy with Haru as his favorite person. He's literally a sheep. I mean, look at his eyes. Fluffy, calm sheep. Either I'm incredibly naive and easily fooled, or he's not the traitor type. Knowing me, could be either.

And Haru? Haru is too busy. Like all the time. Stressed, well-dressed, and under duress. (Well-dressed because Peekaboo is practically an accessory.) He is worrying far too much about Jabberwock to worry about schemes.

Then there's Sinostra. Ritsu, is again, far too openly self involved to be hiding much of anything, and Taiga's attitude makes it seem like this Traitor has been at the school for a bit by now. Ritsu is a first year.

Romeo? Firstly, he already has shady shit going on. The explosive powder? The secret room, the kidnappings, the debt collecting, his whole thing is debauchery. A traitor would at least be subtle with it.

I sincerely doubt Taiga would admit to being a traitor. I mean it's Taiga, so who knows, but you get what I'm saying.

Hotarubi would be next. I'm only halfway through the episode, so forgive me if I interpret things as suspicious that get explained later, but I feel like the only one I can openly say is free of suspicion is Zenji. He has enough going on, and Taiga would have to know he exists to be able to say he's a traitor.

Haku, I'm gonna be honest, is extremely suspicious. Sure, it might've just been explained why, the existence of Zenji I mean, but his general disposition is just off-putting to me. He's also the first person MC met in the story, (if you ignore Taiga having tried to throw us off a bus) so it makes sense Taiga would say "keep deceiving you".

It would also feel like a good parallel NGL; to have the story start with a hostile character and a kind, guiding character, only to end the main plot by having the "aggressive" one be the only one who had caught on to the traitorous nature of the "merciful" character the MC had trusted so.

Then there would be Subaru. I can't say much about him decisively since, well, I'm not done with the Hotarubi episode yet, but he seems almost unwaveringly secretive. He lied about why Lyca is locked up, (at least from what I gathered from that interaction,) he sympathizes with the anomalies, (not a crazy position on the issue, but suspicious nonetheless when surrounded with people who see no problem with ripping them to shreds,) and overall seems almost too trusting... And trustworthy, honestly. He also noticed Leo quite quickly and seemed very quick to come to the (reasonable and true) conclusion that Leo would start some shit, which is weirdly observant tbh.

Okay, so that was one long paragraph, but there is one more house I've met so far, in the week that I've been endlessly playing this game. Mortkranken!

As this would've been the house me and my friend would've been in if we hadn't both placed Hotarubi in the quiz, I may be a bit biased when I say I doubt the traitorous ghoul is in Mortkranken, but nonetheless.

First of all, Yuri's god complex, while likely a common trait with renegades and treasonists, (I googled synonyms bc that same word over and over felt too monotonous, r u proud of me) doesn't feel like enough evidence of ill intent, especially not within a doctor. His whole job is kinda helping people stay alive.

Jiro(?) doesn't seem too reasonable of a suspect either tbh. Sure, they said there's rumours he woke up in a lab one day or WTV, but he also seems to have his own shit going on with illness or smth, and honestly he seems more like the type to go with the flow until he finally gets out of school than the type to pay attention to "the clash" or interdorm/schoolwide drama. (Also I still feel bad for us having blown up his prototype but yk. Prolly better than snorting it, so I'd call that a win.)

Um. Anyway those are my opinions. This took like two hours to write and it's midnight RN so sorry if it gets incomprehensible towards the end (or in general) but I am tired. As usual, this is just the app I use to scream into the void about my opinions when Notes App isn't doing it for me.

Tldr; possible suspects are Thoma, Alan, (?) and either living Hotarubi ghouls. With that said tho it's definitely Haku.

I'm so tired.


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1 month ago

Hello people I have begun watching GquuuuuuX

So far, I like it. Space criminal lesbians, robot dogfighting, high ass weirdo who somehow got his hands on the biggest fucking plot device ever (that probably has a corpse in it), all in all, very good show.

Though there is one thing I want to talk about.

Episode 2. When the British guy is entering the Gundam.

... Why does the guy in the background slide- he just SLIDES off-screen like one second he's still and the next he's going like 2 mph LEFTWARDS bro I burst out laughing at the ASCENDING EMPLOYEE


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2 months ago

Welcome to Tokyo Debunker, the most inclusive game out there! (/J)

We have...

• Disabled single father

• Metrosexual

• Anemic

• Poor and in-debt

• (greedy) Bitch

• (passive aggresive) Bitch

• BITCH

• Dead

• Chronically ill

• Rich (ew)

• Bitch (more literally)

• Malewife (we got a few of these)

• Victim of child labor laws (it doesn't count if they don't pay u)

• Sheep (?)

• Gay couple just barely keeping their relationship afloat

• Gay couple just barely keeping their relationship afloat

• Gay couple just barely keeping their relationship afloat

• Gay couple just- you get the point

• Psychic

• Psycho

• A lot of psychos imma be real with you

• Murderer (probably more than one actually)

• MurderED (two of these)

• Lawyer (sorry, 'paralegal')

• Anxiety

• Anxiety pt. 2

• Anxiety ridden girl having to play handler for 20-ish flirty college boys

• Seemingly crippling school system so bad that half of the SPED students are renegades

• Cats

• British

Which one is ur favorite?


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2 months ago

Wait, hold on, Elias is the JANITOR???

I'm doing a supremely normal thing (writing down every line Haru ever said for character study) and I did NOOTTT realize that it's heavily implied Hyde made up the whole 'No transfer until second year' rule

3 months ago

Tdbk EP 9 spoil er es

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es
Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es
Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

Jiro is going to get us killed are you KIDDING ME

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

LMAO I GENUINELY DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY TO THAT. THATS SUCH AN IN CHARACTER THING FOR HIM TO BE WORRIED ABOUT

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es
Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

Well that was a whole big thing- wait how fucking big is that bow???? No wonder he struggled to shoot the right place when just loading it is probably more suited to Odysseus.

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

"you've got to stop him!" HOW??? HES HOLDING A CHAINSAW AND FIGHTING A MASSIVE SPIDER DEMON. SHES LIKE 5'5 AND HUMAN.

... Okay well that happened-

WHAT THE FUCK. Also what was Jiro's "only other option"???

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

Awww. Also what the hell is Romeo screaming about, he's the one who shot it. I mean everyone's glad he did but still-

Tdbk EP 9 Spoil Er Es

Well, that was fun. Can't wait for the next one in about a week or two. Or more. Or less. Who knows at this point really-


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3 months ago

More ep 9 spoilers bc yfushdjsbdjsjddb I love them

More Ep 9 Spoilers Bc Yfushdjsbdjsjddb I Love Them

Kaito phone case. A magic eight ball, a smiley face, French fries..? Possibly roses, some pufferfish creature, and what seems to be either an arcade machine or a tamagotchi. Tamagochi? Also, three cameras in a square, so probably an iPhone.

More Ep 9 Spoilers Bc Yfushdjsbdjsjddb I Love Them
More Ep 9 Spoilers Bc Yfushdjsbdjsjddb I Love Them

I'd assume there's more gasses you can do that with than just nitrogen or hydrogen sulfide. But yk. I'm not a medical professional.

More Ep 9 Spoilers Bc Yfushdjsbdjsjddb I Love Them
More Ep 9 Spoilers Bc Yfushdjsbdjsjddb I Love Them

Firstly, yay! Someone actually remembers the goal for once! Takes them fucking long enough!

Secondly, Kaito you should not be admitting to being either of those. With that said, both.


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3 months ago

Spoilers. Again. Tokyo Debunker 7.

Spoilers. Again. Tokyo Debunker 7.

What is this, the Phantom of The Opera? I mean I suppose it's useful, but catacombs feels like a bit much. Just put a Galaxy express down there or something.

Spoilers. Again. Tokyo Debunker 7.

... So, hold on. If that's the case, why did a demon take Luca's brother? And why do demons make pacts? For a side effect, Luca's demon seems pretty adamant on killing him. Actually, why would Luca be so confident his brother isn't dead? And that the demon is keeping him somewhere? Whatever, loving the exposition either way, not loving that Darkwick literally did lie about the ghouls, but i'm loving the exposition.


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2 months ago

Playing Worldless on switch for the first time (w/ Anastasia in the background) bc it was on sale and, well, I watch Windette.

First impressions: that was one badass supernova.

Why are the stars attacking each other?

Oh! That's me!

The girls (stars) are fighting. (Trying to supernova)

Oh my god the idle is so cool. Bro this games soundtrack and sfx already slap.

Oh my god those are not stars

What the fuck why am I in

I don't even know where this is

Oh I can hum! Like sky! That's cute.

What this. I killed him. What- what now.

I absorbed a dude. Um. I proceeded to get undertaled by some spiky orange dude. Ouch.

Where am I?

I got out. I killed a guy. Stuff is happening.

God this place is confusing. WHERE AM I GOING!?

Found it.

FOUND HIM! HES IN THE WATER! HES IN MY GODDAMN REFLECTION!

OH MY GOD IM JESUS.

Oh wow, another guy to absorb :D I can't wait to fight this one too and unlock another skill! :3

THE SUN JUST CRUSHED A KID AND OFF. WHY DID IT STARE AT ME.

WOW this guy is just absolutely kicking my ass, gimme a bit.


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3 months ago

So, do the Stigmas in Tokyo Debunker have side effects? I'm not sure if it was ever mentioned, but like.

Alan gets strength at the cost of bloodlust, it seems.

Towa can't talk during the day, not sure what his Stigma is.

Taiga gets... Fuck if I know. Numbness? In return for insatiable hunger.

Subaru gets psychometry, but he can't turn it off.

I feel like this is an important part of Stigmas. Do they ever explain this in game? Am I going crazy?


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