unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?
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unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?
I was wondering what the heck does Blue Star symbolize in PM lore until-
Oh wings…
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unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?
Today, I met a little spider :D
He was still chilling on my arm after this recording lul
You wouldn't last an hour in the asylum where they raised me
BBB brother ordeal au
Judge of death
The beasts that had been mixed with 1407 were the birds of death and change
They heavily associate with helping lingering souls pass on, they were collected from the planet "Windara"
If we persisted, we would remove the role as judge unto 1407 so that there would be no other goal worth coming than our decisions
But alas, that didnt come to and it was nothing more than just a mere spare
Angin had woken in a foreign land, it was difficult to move as he was weak and hungry,
he could not process his movements and could not gain any determination as he understood that he had been thrown away. He remained unmoving until something had encountered him, as it seemed to be a gigantic feline.
He had thought, he has reached his fate, but he should not be the one to determine his own fate as he still has his role as judge to advance upon.
He awoke to somewhat a man, He had thought he was brought back to the lab until he got clearer vision, this man was moreso but a young teen, seemingly cleaning his arm which was shaped like a blade.
Confused, he tried getting up, and once his vision fixed itself, he noticed that this boy had his neck numbered "1403"
Here, the whole animation by Luke Humphris. Check out his whole channel it’s awesome (if you haven’t known him already
“Earth’s military took him down like, 8 years ago? We’re basically torturing an elder god, there’s no way this ends well, but what can we do at this point?”
I think that one thing people fail to understand is that unsolicited literary criticism coming from an online stranger who is reading with no knowledge of what the authors intended goal is, is not going to be received the same as say: the authors beta reader or friends who know what the authors intended goal and has the sufficient knowledge and input to help the author reach that desired outcome.
"But I'm only trying to be helpful" How do I know you have the knowledge and literary skill for you to be able to actaully do that when we don't know each other and you are essentially a stranger to me? Are you applying this criticism based out of personal biased experience and desire to see the story or characterization be driven in another direction or tweaked, or do you know the author's intentions for the character? If the story is incomplete, are you basing your criticism of a character on the incomplete narration with only partial information available of them or are you building up a report until the story's completion? Did the author provide you with the information needed to make a fully informed criticism?
Have you discussed with the author what their plans are or are you assuming them based off the narration, especially if the narration is proven or implied to be unreliable or missing key points of the plot? Are you unbiased enough to help them reach their desired outcome for the characters and story regardless of your personal feelings towards the characters/antagonists and setting? Can you handle being told your specific input isn't wanted because you're a reader and/or have no written anything relating to their genre or topic? Do you understand and respect that the author's personal experiences might influence their writing and make it different than how you would have done it personally? Do you understand if an author only wants input from a specific demographic relating to their story?
If it's for fanfiction or other hobby media, are you holding a free hobby to a professional standard? Are you trying to give criticism because you feel like the author has produced 'subpar job performance' of their fic? Are you viewing their work as a personal intimate outlet or something that must conform with mass media? Are you applying rules and guidelines when the fic is shared for simple sharing sake? Is your criticism worded appropriately and focused on the parts where the author has requested input on rather than a general dismissal and or disapproval?
Have you put yourself in a place where you assumed you have the input needed for the story to evolve better, or have you asked what the author needs and what they're having trouble with? Can you handle having your criticism rejected if the author decides their story doesn't need the change and not take it as a personal offense against your character? Are you crossing that boundary because you think you are doing the author a favor? Are you trying to be helpful, or do you just want to be?
I think sometimes when people hear authors go 'please don't give me unsolicited writing advice or criticism' they automatically chalk it up to 'this author doesn't want ANY constructive feedback on their stuff at all' and not "i already have trusted individuals who will help me with my writing goals and- hey i don't know you like that, please stop acting so overly familiar with me'
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