Boober Moment

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Fantastic art

Some smol ones for tonight.

they put me in jail :(

Me moment….

I’m about to dive head first into my renaissance girl era. Devouring books, feverishly learning languages, working through my watch list of films and adding entries to my film journal, discovering new music, buying new art supplies and painting more regularly, filming and editing vlogs simply for my own personal consumption without posting them, diving more into the art of cooking and even treating my entire look as an art form. The passion and love and richness of it all. It excites me.

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Writing Tips

Words to Avoid

This does not include dialogue.

These can be used (of course, it’s your writing!) just try to make sure they are not overused.

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↳ tell & don’t show

➳ telling words force the reader away from the story; showing immerses them

➝ consider

➝ decide

➝ feel / felt

➝ got

➝ has / have / had

➝ hear / heard

➝ is / are / was / were / am

➝ look

➝ next

➝ notice

➝ ponder

➝ recall

➝ remember

➝ see / saw

➝ smell

➝ taste

➝ then

➝ think / thought

➝ watch

➝ wonder

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↳ extra & can be removed

➳ declutter your writing; keeping your story concise holds the attention of the reader better

➝ absolutely

➝ completely

➝ down / up

➝ just

➝ really

➝ totally

➝ very

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↳ vague

➳ don’t make the reader guess what you mean; show them exactly what you’re describing

➝ a little

➝ a lot

➝ about

➝ almost

➝ appear

➝ approximately

➝ few

➝ like

➝ lots

➝ many

➝ might

➝ more

➝ most

➝ much

➝ often

➝ perhaps

➝ rather

➝ roughly

➝ seem

➝ some (somebody, somehow, someone, something, sometime, somewhat, somewhere)

➝ thing

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↳ absolutes

➳ don’t give the reader the opportunity to find discrepancies in your story

➝ absolute

➝ all

➝ always

➝ complete

➝ entire

➝ every (everybody, everyone, everything, every time, everywhere)

➝ never

➝ none

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↳ adverbs

➳ be as concise and meaningful as possible; every word you use should be the ideal descriptor

➝ anything ending in ‘-ly’

➝ if you’re using ‘-ly’ there is a better verb or adjective to use

➝ angrily, quickly, sadly, softly, suddenly, etc.

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↳ continuous action words

➳ these words reduce the sense of urgency; keep your readers hooked by keeping the tension

➝ after

➝ as

➝ continued

➝ when

➝ while

➝ ‘-ing’ verbs

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↳ transitions

➳ transition words allow writers to avoid finding connections between sentences, but meaningful connections increase immersion and flow

➝ after

➝ also

➝ anyway

➝ as

➝ besides

➝ even though

➝ finally

➝ however

➝ later

➝ meanwhile

➝ next

➝ so

➝ soon

➝ then

Hey. This is a serious post calling out the behavior in the owls nest discord dedicated to OwlF45’s fanfiction community. Owl is non-participatory in the downfall of this server. They do nothing to moderate this madness and have nothing to do with this server and their crimes aginst humanity.

Tch. Anime profile picture. Degenerate.

Of course one of them have a Tec###ade user

This place is a fucking freak show……

I want to call out this DISGUSTING behavior done by these absolute MONSTERS of society. These scum of the earth are why this server and the WORLD is fucked up. I hope by exposing this evil underbelly of the fanfiction world I can help make the world a better place from FREAK-SHOWS like this…….

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