I Made A 8 Pages Comic About Empanada Being A Detective And Styled It Like It Is A Whole Comic Series

Page one of the comic. It starts with two big panels of richas and ems eyes, staring at each other like a cowboy standoff. Then a bell rings. Sunny enters a bakery, in which Em and Richas are playing cards at a table. She screams " Hiiii! Panada, I need your help!". Em turns to answer her: "Hi, Sunny. What's u-" Then she is interrupted by Richas who yells "Mau" and thus is close to winning the card game. Em is shocked. When she recovers she tells Sunny: "One Moment, sun! I really have to win this game!" "KKKKK, Try" is all Richas answers to that, while Sunny approaches him from behind. In the last panel Sunny look sceptically at Richas last card.

Page two of the comic. Sunny looks up to Em from Richas cards and announces: "It's Kings leaves", which leaves Richas stunned. Em answers: "Thanks, my sun!" and manages to turn the game in her favor and win, while Richas complains dumbfonded: "That's not fair !1!". At the end she triumphantly says: "Mau Mau". "Sunny helped you. That's unfair" states Richas. "Doesn't matter" conters Em. "Nah, you cheated so you auto loose" "It doesn't matter because you cheated first." "Prove it" "Easy". Em claims: "You just hid your cards in your shirt. They'll fall out when you stand up." "Okay, you'll see" says Richas and puts his hands on the table. He stands up and indeed: playing cards start to fall out of his shirt. "Yeah... I'm watching" comments Em. Sunny chuckles "idk, seems like Em played fairer to me...". "Have fun with the dishes!" wishes him Em, as Richas leaves defeated with his head hanging low. "What's up, Sunny?" asks Em as Sunny takes Richas place at the table. "Okay, so I was home alone today because my pa is out with tio pac and fit. I went up to grab something to eat and then I dis- covered that someone broke the avocado toast factory. We have to find who did that and fix the machine!" explains Sunny. Em is optimistic: "Okay, Sun! Don't worry, I'm sure we got this! We'll figure this out before Tubbo comes back." "Let's go! First, we have to investigate the crime scene" says Em, already half outside of the bakery door.

Page 3 of the comic: On the Top, Sunny and Em are standing in front of multiple machines and boilers. It says "The avocado factory" on top. Both gaze up ate the machines. "Uh... yeah, I have no clue of machines. No idea what's even broken." admits Em. Sunny and Em share a look and at the same time shout: "Ramon". "Sunny, can you go to
Ramon and ask him to come over? I’m gonna do my best to investigate the area". So Em investigates the factory. She searches everywhere until she finds a black feather on top of one of the boilers. That's when Sunny and Ramon return "We are back" exclaims Sunny when she enters the factory. "Do you think you can repair the factory?" Sunny asks Ramon. "I think so" he answers.

Page for of the comic: Em turns around and hops down from one of the machines very cutely. She walks to Sunny and Ramon. "Have you found something yet" sunny asks, while Ramon is opening his Tool box. "We have our first suspect now." states Em. Then she proudly shows the feather she found to a confused Sunny and Ramon. "Look! I found this on top of one of the boilers. It's a feather from phil. Maybe he wanted some Avocado Toast, but he is bad with machines and doesn't know how they work." ponders Em. "So Phil accidentally broke it?", asks Sunny. "Maybe" "What should we do now?" "I'd say, let's go to him and ask if he was here this morning." Sunny and Em turn to leave, Ramon stands up: "Wait, what a-" "Thank you for repairing it! See you later!" interrupts him Sunny.
At the bootm is a drawing of the top of the wall with the potato farm disappearing in at the horizon. Clouds in the sky beyond and some crows flying above. Lullah sits at the edge and plays her flute, Phil is standing at the edge of the farm talking to chayanne, who is harvesting potatoes.

Page 5 of the comic. Chayanne is pulling out a whole potato plant. Sunny and Em are approaching. "Hello" greets Em. Sunny is waving very animated "Good morning, everyone!". "Hola Em and Sunny!" "Hello" greet Chay and Lullah back. "Hello, you two! What brings you here?" asks Phil. "We're investigating a crime! And you're a suspect!" responds Sunny with a serious look on her face. Em tries to explain: "The avocado toast factory broke and we try to figure out what happened. I found one of your feathers there," "So you found proof that we were there once and then immediatley thought we broke the entire thing?" jumps Lullah in. "Well, first I wanted to ask..." "Well, you're wrong here" interrupts Lullah, Sunny jumps into the conversation as well by defending "There is no Point in denying. We have Evidence!". Em tries again to placate "Actually, we can't be sure. That's why I wanted to ask..." "Last time I went, the factory worked just fine when I left I think" Phil helps. "When did it break? We were all here harvesting potatoes all morning." adds Chay.

"... this morning..." admits Sunny. "Then we have an Alibi" states Chay, walking towards them with a basket full of potatoes. "Thanks for your help! That's all I wanted to know" says Em. "Oh btw Em, This Potato harvest is great! I'm gonna make potato bread for the bakery later!" adds Chay. "That sounds soo good! Let's also make some potato bread rolls later!" Empanada answers. She is a bit frustrated that this didn't go well, but motivates herself quickly again: "ok, sunny, we're done here! Let's go back to the factory and search for new clues! Bye Phil, Bye Lullah! See you later, Chay!" They all say goodbye and Sunny and Em are back to the factory. "Maybe Ramon found something while working on the machine." hopes Em. "Hiii Ramon, we are back" greets Sunny. "We asked Phil, but according to chay, they all have an alibi for the whole morning . So it wasn't him. Did you notice anything weird?" asks Em. "Hm, the settings of the regulators were off and some cogs were missing. But I've fixed it" says Ramon while crawling out from underneath a machine. "So someone broke it on purpose!!" Sunny remarks. "Who even would destroy a free factory?" wonders Em. "Sunny, do you have any Idea who on the Island could have a motive to manipulate the avocado toast factory?"

"Tio bad loves to play pranks, Dapper as well or Richas... Maybe the federation? They also don't like my Pa..." says Sunny. Em is a bit overwhelmed from too many suspects. "Some good news: I've fixed the Avocado toast factory! It's running again. We once again have infinite avocado toast for everyone! It's even more effective than before!" exclaims Ramon proudly in front of the rattling machines. "OMG! Thank you, Ramon! You are the best!!" Sunny enthusiastically hugs Ramon. "That's great, but we still didn't find the one who broke it" says Em demotivated. "Don't worry, Em! We'll get them!" assures her Sunny. "Hello everyone! I'm Back!" echoes a shout. All three turn around perplexed as Tubbo walks in.

I Made A 8 Pages Comic About Empanada Being A Detective And Styled It Like It Is A Whole Comic Series

I made a 8 pages comic about Empanada being a detective and styled it like it is a whole comic series (will there ever be another chapter? propably not) This is my first longer than one page comic >.<

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