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yue qingyuan, holding up a portrait of shen jiu: have you seen my shidi?
random cang qiong disciple: is peak lord shen missing? do we need to search for him??
yue qingyuan, looking at the portrait and sighing wistfully: no, I just wanted to show you how handsome and elegant he is.
Set someone on fire. Twice.
Pause a chase sequence for a karaoke competition. Make the song choice key to the climax.
Give the villain a parrot whose mocking repetition undermines them at the most inconvenient moments.
Add a dragon.
Set your romantic confession scene on a fast-moving vehicle.
Make readers think a beloved character dies, only to reveal them alive and ready for action later. You get all of the angst and none of the hate mail!
Make the power go out at the worst time.
Snow your heroes in with the villain. Do they kill each other or break out monopoly?
Force your characters to act as other characters (disguises, body swapping, go wild with this one).
Add another dragon.
Some idioms and phrases you should know about part II :
Read The Riot Act : to scold, reprimand, or reprove one severely for an error or mistake.
Be Cleaned Out : to be emptied or devoid of money, food, resources, etc.
The Stars Are Aligned : current situation or set of conditions is ideal for the prospects of some activity or endeavor.
Climb The Social Ladder : to improve one's position within the hierarchical structure or makeup of a culture, society, or social environment.
Wash One's Mouth Out With Soap : to punish one for using rude, vulgar, or obscene language by cleaning their mouth with soap, usually used merely as a threat.
Get Down To Work : to begin being serious about something, to begin attending to business or work at hand.
Have Someone Pegged : to distinctly regard one as being a certain type of person.
Breathe A Word : to share information that is supposed to be kept secret, often used in the negative to encourage silence.
Shake Like A Leaf : to tremble violently with fear or nervousness.
Boil The Ocean : to engage in futile tasks.
Feel Blue : to feel sad.
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There was a tweet about Jingyi possibly being Jin Rusong, and this popped in my mind 🤣
LJY: What?! I’m your son? I’m Jin Rusong?!
JGY: Yes…Please und-
LJY: Is that why I’m short?!
JL: THAT’S YOUR BIG TAKE AWAY FROM THIS?!
LJY: SHUT UP! You don’t know what it’s like down here.
JL: You’re only 4 cm shorter!
LJY: 4 cm too short to reach the top of the shelf! This whole time I thought it was the bland food, but it turns out I came from midgets!
JGY: …
WWX: *Burst out laughing like a maniac*
JL: HOW ARE WE RELATED?
LJY: HOLY SHIT WE’RE RELATED?! No wonder I hate you!
JL: *In tears* Shut up! I hate you too!
LSZ: Guys, let’s calm down.
QS:…You know, I’m not so disgusted about the incest thing suddenly. But I want a divorce, and we’ll keep it a secret.
JGY: Unless you tell me who sent you the letter.
QS: No.
JGY: I need to know so that I can find out who else knows, and kill them so we won’t be slandered by the Cultivation World. Besides, who ever decided to tell you this now after all this time must be doing it for money.
QS:…It was Bicao.
JGY: Thank you. Now excuse me future ex-wife. I’m going to go interrogate a maid.
*And thus Nie Huaisang gets found out, and it’s a whole different complicated mess where LXC is the one most shafted by it. In the mean time, Qin Su is happily living at Gusu to get to know her son.*
i will not apologize to my sibiling whos done the same thing to me and never apologized you hypocrite
I SUPER LOVE TIM AND CASSANDRA BECAUSE:
they went from stranger (hell yeah Timothy avoid Cass because he felt intimidated by Cass’ assassin background) to friends
Cass is always ready to rescue help Timothy
she took care of Tim and worried about him, not only because the big brood Bat told her so but she did it on her own accord too
while Tim took care of her too, they took care of each other and I love it so much
CASSANDRA IS TIM’S FAMILY. I REPEAT CASSANDRA IS ONE OF TIM’S PRECIOUS FAMILY
TIM WON’T LET GO, HE WON’T LET CASS GO. SHE’S FAMILY.
AND TIM IS A DEAR PERSON FOR CASSANDRA TOO. SHE EVEN ASKED TIM TO JOIN HER BECAUSE IT WAS HER DREAM. CASS WON’T LET TIM UNDER THE BAT BECAUSE SHE THOUGHT THE BAT WILL USE HIM LIKE HOW CAIN USED HER. CASSANDRA WILL MISS TIM
AND TIM WILL MISS HER TOO.
EVEN WHEN CASS BEING A VILLAIN (brainwashed by Deathstroke), TIM WON’T LET ANYONE HURT HER
AND AFTER SHE CAME BACK, TIM IS THE ONE WHO STILL TRUSTS HER AND DEFENDS HER, WHEN NIGHTWING CLEARLY SHOWS HIS DISTRUST.
EVEN THE BIG (A**HOLE) BROODING BAT DOUBTS HER WHEN SHE WENT MISSING, TIM STILL TRUSTS AND DEFENDS HER. TIM BELIEVE HER.
HAVE I SAID THAT TIM ALWAYS BELIEVE HER AND DEFEND HER? YES, I HAVE AND HE DOES.
LAST BUT NOT LEAST, THE PEAK OF IT: CASS LEFT GOTHAM BUT TIM STILL REMINDS HER THAT SHE WILL ALWAYS BE HIS FAMILY, THAT HE ALWAYS GOT CASS’ BACK. HE GIVES HER HER NEW PERSONA (which the main reason I love Black Bat so much, because there is a beautiful history behind it).
THIS IS THE END OF MY ESSAY, PLEASE LOVE THEM.