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Behold, the saddest Christmas comic ever created.

Photos from my Uncle Scrooge #251. This story is titled “‘Tis the Season”. Script by Bob Foster and art by Mike Peraza. 

The Shape of Water by Arashi.C.

I'm sorry to do this but.... I got a idea of how age bracket au Fang and Cahaya meet.

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"Abang do you really need to go? "

Little Fang ask his brother in front the kindergarten's gates with some tear coming out his eyes .

"Yes, Fang today it's your first day to your new school, you could know new friends ."

"But I don't want you leave yet. What if they are mean? Just like the last one that make fun of my eyes ? "

"Oh Fang....... I'll promise that you'll have friends this time .I'll will get your favorite carrot donuts went it's end. Pinky swear? " Kaizo reach out the pinky to Fang.

"Ok. Pinky swear. "

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"Alright everyone, today we got a new friend will join our class! Everyone,Meet Fang ! "

The teacher started to introduce the Fang to the children. Fang greet them with a awkward wave as he go to his seat to settle down. Feeling that the other kids is staring at him the way that he don't like it.

Later, went it was lunch time the other kids keep asking him about:"Why is your eyes red? ", "Is that Fake? " ,"You're eye looks weird ". They're all judging his unusual eyes .

He hates it.

After a few days in the kindergarten . The kids are all lost interest on him by the teachers . Which is a good thing but he can't help but notice that there's a boy who always get left out by the class , always alone. He never heard him speak or saw him playing with the other classmates. He just doing his own things and reading.

He's very different compare to the others. But that's fine as long that he don't bother him...... Right?

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Today the boy approach him and keeps staring him.

"......What do you want? "

Later the boy show the writing board written with " Do you have albino? That cause your eyes red? "

"What? "

The boy flip the page and he writes on the other side. This time is written with :

"I read it on the book, it says that albino have red eyes . But I'm not sure so I want to ask you. "

Fang is stunned by the boy's question. This is the first time he got ask by question like this.

"I'm not sure?.... " He reply dumbfounded .

Then both of them standing there while the boy keeps staring his eyes.

He writes again. This time is written with :

"I like your eyes, it's pretty like a ruby "

"......WhAt?!?! " this is the first time that Fang got complement with his eyes by someone who is same age as him. He's face now are completely red like a tomato.

Later, when he's fully clam .

"So.... What's your name? " he asked.

The boy show the name that is written on it with "Cahaya "

"Well my name is Fang! Nice to meet you Haya! "

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"Abang! Abang! I have made a friend! And he like my eyes! "

BABIESSSS

To have red eyes, youd have less pigment which causes you to be very sensitive to light, or you have conjunctivitis, allergy or other eye disorders

Technically Fang isnt supposed to have red eyes but ill put that aside cause THIS IS SUCH A CUTE STORY AND ITS SO SAD FANG GETS MADE FUN OF

Like look at Cahaya and Fang being friends immediately, theyre so cute :))

Life is a journey, don’t be afraid to see where it takes you.

This is the first time I draw Amity and Luz and it’s for stupid joke about “Hunter isn’t a morning person”!!!

Fantastic hands references by the website Hong14cafe.

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Guys, let’s not forget about baby Taylor Lautner’s sicknasty number in Shark Boy and Lava Girl…

Hii, i admire you a lot, every chapter of ECM encourages me a lot, i hope yo are well and im sorry for the bad english in my cuestion😭

Your best writing tips? Everything is valid, whether writing in general o writing fanfics, whatever you think for sure is good, thanks for writing 🙏💗😔

thank-you so much!! I'm glad my writing can do that for you!!

Oh man, I have soooo many things to say, but I'll give you some simplified ones to start with! Buckle up buttercup, this is a long'un!

General Writing Tips:

I know it sounds dumb! But just write. Write a little, write a lot, just try not to get bogged down with it being 'good' or 'bad' or anywhere in between. I'm a firm believer in writing being like a muscle: the more you do it, the easier (and the better) it becomes. And also, crucially, this shouldn't be a time where you do things like... a) hunting for the perfect word b) doing research c) cross reference with a past chapter This is a writing only time! Make yourself place holders (I write XK for words I can't think of, as it's 2 letter that will never appear together so I can CTRL+F it easily! I make comments in the draft specifying what to check or research. I highlight parts I know need LOTS of work) so you can quickly move past what's blocking you and continue writing.

Find a writing habit and environment that works for you. Typing? Hand-writing? Coloured pages? White pages? Dictating? Working in a public place? A private space? (When I start out a story, I often handwrite. And I'll turn back to it if I'm stuck, too. I also write a lot in public, as I find the pressure of other people around me stops me wasting time on my phone... or Tumblr lol).

Get yourself a writing friend! I have a friend I see almost weekly and it's my most productive time of the week (For example, today I wrote 5600 words! Crazy!). Online works too (if you use the pomodoro, you can compare word counts, make a competition of it). If you're doing it IRL, DO NOT expect to get anything done the first time. Or the second time.... but the more you do it, the easier it is for you both to fall straight into writing. (This is the exact same advice I giving to my students about 'study dates' 😉 )

If you find it hard to 'break the seal', then try a warm up. Set yourself a 5-10 minute timer and write based on an activity. E.g. tell a story from the POV of an object in your room! Write a detailed description of your foot! Write a 5 sentence story! Find a picture and write a scene inspired by it! Or get yourself a prompt list and use that. These are all things I would do for students back when I ran a creative writing club at school.

Use the pomodoro system when writing (it's great for studying too!). That's 20 minutes of nothing but writing - no searching up stuff! No looking at your phone! Just writing. Then take a 5 minute break. Then another 20 minutes of writing. Rinse and Repeat! You'd be amazed at how much you can get done!

THIS ONE IS SO IMPORTANT: 👏 The first thing you write is the worst thing you write! That's not just okay! It's expected!! 👏 This is something I tell ALL my students and equally myself. The editing process is SO crucial and honestly, the best thing you can do to improve is - and you'll hate me for saying this! - rewrite your entire first draft. This is why I say, 'don't worry about the first thing you've written'. Because it won't be the end product. (This is why I so often hand-write. Because typing it up then becomes the rewrite.) The re-write is when you should be thinking carefully about your phrasing, and when you can go and do that research. (I will note, I actually don't do this much anymore, but I've also been writing obsessively for 19 years... so do with that what you will (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)

Read your work out loud. What reads fine in your head might come out as nonsense out loud. This is especially true for dialogue! The better it flows out your fabulous mouth, the better it reads. I've done this so much I've mostly internalised it, but I always always do my final edit as a read through out loud. All 140+K of ECM has come out my gob at least once.

Actual writing tips:

When it comes to sentence structure and phrasing, one of the best things I ever did for myself was read the book Sin and Syntax by Constance Hale. I don't expect every writer to do so, but I do think it's worth reading (I'd like to specify, I generally HATE reading non-fiction but I found it a valuable read).

Here are a few things to keep in mind when actually writing:

Bad repetition: it's a classic, but overuse of certain words sticks out like a sore thumb. Even now I'll do it and won't notice until the final read through (out loud! See my previous tip haha). That is NOT to say that you should just right click 'synonyms'! It's better to edit the sentence itself, think about whether that word is even necessary before choosing to select another word).

Nuance in language is soooo important. This is why I generally discourage just the right-click 'synonym' option. Certainly in the nonsensical English language, there are subtleties in word choice that are critical to preventing your work for turning into nonsense (something I wish my students would understand!). Think of the different meanings conveyed through choices like house / bungalow / condo / flat / apartment / mansion / Mcmansion. All have differing connotations and can't be used interchangeably. Same with floor vs ground. Make sure you understand the connotations (associated meanings) of the word you're choosing before you use it.

Following on from this, Choose specific nouns and dynamic verbs, rather than relying on your adjectives/adverbs to do all the work. Not ' one storey house': bungalow. Not 'walk tiredly': stumble / trudge. Of course, you don't have to do this all the time and I'm not saying adverbs/adjectives are evil! But I think a lot of writers become overly reliant upon them.

Avoid redundant language. Consider the words that are doing the heavy lifting in your sentences. Is there anything in the sentence that doesn't need to be there because you've already implied it? e.g. Sara trudged tiredly into her bedroom and fell onto her bed. In this example, 'trudged' already implies exhaustion. And one would assume her bed is in her bedroom. Likewise 'fall' isn't the most exciting of verbs. So I'd change it to something like this -> Sara trudged through the doorway to collapse onto her bed. (Note here I'm also thinking of the implied meaning of 'onto' rather than 'into', which would suggest her bed is still made up).

Keep in mind who your narrator is and adjust your writing accordingly. Consider their personality, their background and the influence of their culture on the ways in which they'd think / write things. For example, as Peter is a character prone to ramble, I'll sometimes have him do the same in his narration. And because he's a silly little guy, I'll also have his train of thoughts turn in silly ways. His science background means I'll occasionally throw in a science reference too (though it's not my strongest knowledge base these days! So it requires more research lol). In contrast, Jason's love of literature make him more likely to use 'fancy' words like 'eschew', literary references and more elaborate metaphors. But at the same time, his Crime Alley upbringing means I have him use a lot of contractions. And because I see him as a character who is both a dramatic bastard and a highly efficient guy, I will use a lot of one word, or very short sentences. (If you're using multiple narrators, it might pay to write these ideas down!)

Anyways, I could go on, but it's also 20 to 11PM here and I've already written 5600 words today 🥲 My phalanges are tired!

I at least hope you can find something helpful or encouraging from all of this!

"Intriguing, you're not as incompetent as other cookies~ 💛"

Ananas/Mango is the way to GO,tbh

a comic about someone who gets a visit from the reaper a bit sooner than expected, but has someone whos been waiting for them 

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