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(Also thanks to my bro for help with translation)
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Been sitting on this for years and in light of Deltarune Chapter 2’s announcement, I felt I might as well go ahead and post this!
(Read desc for infodump about my au if you wanna 😭)
The faded headshots next to each colored pic is their past selves from when the game took place
part 2: main & secret bosses Uh anyways au yap sesh starts below:
It's called Lost Pieces, and basically it's a deltarune au where Kris and Susie forgot about the prophecy and stopped going to Castletown & exploring dark worlds after they came back from the cyberworld— and then remember about it later when they are all Asriel's age & in college and stuff, and have to reinstill hope in everyone and reform the Fun Gang/@$%& Squad/Lancer Fanclub (in this au, it's called the Lancer fanclub).
(TW: mental health stuff, familial issues, charecter death, child abuse)
This au takes place after a true route (not a wierd route/snowgrave route, Noelle nor the others killed anyone.. exempt Spamton but like that was on accident 😭) (he is still technically around guys dw)
In Lost Pieces, Kris and Susie discovered the darkworld while they were in middleschool (they were 12-13yrs), Ralsei was around their age as well, and Lancer was two years younger than the three (10yrs).
The lighteners first arrived in 2018, since that's when Deltarune came out. The events of chapter one took place on 12/11/18 and chapter two on 12/12/18. That was the last day Kris was in the darkworld— however Susie's last visit was in 2020. She didn't visit super often, but would try for once a month.
Worldbuilding-specific stuff:
The town that Kris and Susie live in is in the northern midwest of the U.S.
In Lost Pieces, the darkworld have different names— The darkworld that contains 'Card Kingdom' is called Kaardarke (pronounced "card-ar-kay-"), The Cyberworld is technically called 'Cybertopia', but nobody really calls it that anymore.
Each darkworld had their own offical language before The Knight showed up— after that, they all switched over to the language that the knight spoke. That's the only reason that Kris and Susie were even able to understand the darkeners.
Each darkener species is bound to the world they came from (EX: Maises to the Cyberworld, Hathy to Kaardarke), but before the knight created each world's respective fountains, they could crossover into eachother's worlds using The Pure-Fountain in the then-empty Castletown as a portal (This was because the spare classroom used to have a small computer lab). Only after the fountains in each world were created, they couldn't crossover anymore due to the energy from the opposite portals turning visiters to stone. Eventually the computer lab was removed from the spare classroom and all of the old supplies were moved to the library. Darkeners who have one parent from each of the two darkworlds are bound to the world that they spend the most time in, which is why Lancer was bound to Kaardarke rather than Cybertopia.
While The Cyberworld uses a lot of more-lightworldish concepts, such as the months being January-December like they are in english-speaking countries & understanding social refrences (like how Queen understands lightener internet humor, and how Addisons understand how buisness works, like how a lightener would)— Kaardarke is a lot less connected to the lightworld. They had some vague connections through back when Cybertopians could travel there, but lost a lot of them during the time since then. They have their own calender system, social pyramid and their society functions very differently than Cybertopia's, or the lightworlds'.
Darkener species list time!
First up is Kaardarke:
Hathy
Rudinn
Clobbes (pronounced "claw-bes")— the clubs, basically think of Clover
Tribril (pronounced "trib-rill")— the spades, basically think of King and Lancer
Bloxers
Jigsawra— the puzzle piece lookin' dudes, basically think of the tutorial masters & jigsawry
Rabbick
Chescheckes (pronounced "chez-check-ees")— the checkers guys (C-Rounds & K-Rounds) and Mr. Elegance/Mr. Society
Starwalkers— the starwalker birds .......and of course nobody could forget about my guy The Original Starwalker
Species list for Cybertopia:
Tasques
Swatchlings
Pluggids— plugboy, werewires, werewerewire technically
Maises
Poppups
Addisons
Ambyu-Lancers
ViroViroKuna
Musiks— basically, think of Sweet, Cap'n & K_k of whatever their names are 😭
Mascottics— everyone else, (basically the thing about Mascottics is that they are all unique)— think Nubert or sum idk
Okay no more species lists, back to notes.
The knight-made fountains can cause darkeners to have vivid nightmares and visions if exposed to them closely for a long period of time. It can influence their behavior too (canon).
The knight showed up in Kaardarke at some point in the late 90s, and in Cybertopia in 2008
The player stopped controling Kris after they came back from the Cyberworld, and seemed to fade out of existance. Kris was left being unable to make desisions for themselves for awhile afterward, since they were so used to the player doing it for them. They also had memory issues after the player left, and barely remembered anything about the darkworld.
Now that they are older, they have learned how to live again, but still feels like something's missing. That's when the player makes it's return, which leads Kris to remember about the prophecy and about their freinds that they accidentaly abandoned.
Susie remembered about her freindgroup in the darkworld better than Kris did, and went back many times before she graduated 8th grade and went on to highschool, which was in a different building. She stopped visiting by that time, since she couldn't just walk over there anytime anymore. Eventually she forgot about it too. But, she still remembers Lancer somewhat, since she viewed him as a younger brother who understood her struggle with her family, he was her favorite out of him and Ralsei.
Susie's parents were not kind to her— or to eachother. They fought all of the time, and physically abused eachother. They did not respect Susie at all, and they hated Noelle when Susie finally told them about her. When Susie graduated, she moved out as quickly as she could.
She has two tattoos— one on each shoulder. They aren't super visable on this ref sheet but one of them is a spade and the other is a heart with Noelle's name in it. Yadda yadda they are lesbians..!
Ralsei hated being alone, and would spend as much time with Lancer as possible when the lighteners weren't around in order to distract himself from thinking about whether or not they had abandoned him. As a result, Lancer and him became good friends and Lancer hired him as the new royal magician of Castletown. Ralsei did his duties the best he could, until he eventually let it hit him that Kris hadn't been around for a year now.
Since Ralsei was basically made for the prophecy, and only existed so that it could be furfilled, he was very terrified of everything falling apart— as kris was the only one who could seal the fountains.
Ralsei vanished after Susie visited for the final time, and ran off. He is still registered as the royal magician, but hasn't been in Castletown for five years now.
As I mentioned in his ref sheet, Lancer is Queen's biological son in this au— which causes some issues for Lancer. For starters, he overheats very easily since his mechanical parts are already warmed from his bodyheat (he does not do well in hot weather, which is part of the reason he was so socially isolated when Kris and Susie met him.
Kaardarke has a relatively warmer climate, (the school forgot to close the heating vent in the spare classroom 😭) which makes it hard for Lancer to leave the castle.
The other reason was that most kaardarkeners hated him because he would cause disturbances frequently when he was out and about.
Lancer also can't tolerate water very well, King understood this and still made him shower excessively whenever he cursed (that last part is canon I swear I am not making this all up)
Lancer had no idea why he was so different from all of the other Tribril, but after the lighteners brought Queen and the Cybertopians to Castletown, Queen told him the truth.
Lancer nowadays is kind of untrusting of Rouxls and Queen, since both kind of coddle him and are kind of helicopter-parents— but then sgain, it's a huge jump from how neglectful King was towards him.
King would often forget to feed Lancer, which would often lead to Rouxls feeding him worms (also canon). King, if he did remember, would give him very.. for lack of a better term, insane dishes that you could barely even consider a full meal.
An example from canon being how Lancer thought that three glasses of milk was a normal dinner (poor Lancer).
King would also harshly punish Lancer over very small issues, like how I mentioned the cursing thing earlier.
King's treatment of Lancer worsened when King had a darkfountain-induced vision/nightmare that lighteners were going to return, and sent Lancer to 'dispose of them', seemingly ignoring the fact that Lancer was ten and by himself.
While Lancer knows that King is more stable now, he cannot forgive him for how he treated him when he was younger.
He is desperate to stop himself from becoming as narrow-minded & hateful as King, but in doing-so, he is adopting some of his mannerisms & has picked up his opinions on lighteners.
You can probably tell who my favorite deltarune charecter is by now...!
Also I should mention that Lancer's full name is Lancer II, his dad's Lancer I.
She still thinks the Cyberworld was a dream, and doesn't think any of it actually happened due to what Susie told her when they were there.
Meanwhile, her father passed away when she was a sophomore, and since then she has dedicated herself to learning medacine. She feels like she can/should help save others, since she couldn't save Rudy.
I will make more posts about this au, secret bosses next since I already have ref sheets for them too. Then the actual bosses and other canon charecters. Maybe I might introduce some of my other little guys by then too. (I made some enemy ocs 🤯🤯) (theres a lot of them too) (and by 'enemy' I don't mean they are antagonists, I mean they are like, species of enemies in the game.. like rudinn and stuff)
if there are any spelling issues then my bad, I wrote this up very quickly 😭
and suselle is canon in this au, rahhh lesbian apocalypse (they are so me)
i tried to make this as adhd friendly as possible as someone w/ adhd, but it might still be hard to read just cus there so much text 💔
Part 1 of the deltarune comic involving my oc Gigi!
This takes place post an hypothetical chapter 3, Susie and Kris are going to the lightworld to collect the counterparts of their darkworld friends but they can't seem to find a specific someone...
Sorry btw if some lore is incorrect / for spelling mistakes. It's been a while since i actually played the game (fake fan, i know) and i'm dyslexic as shit.
Deltarune chapters three and four in exactly a month!! To celebrate I made an oc and a bit of story of how they'd fit in an imagined chapter 3.
So the story basically goes that Kris opens a dark fountain and they end up in what I'll call The Entertainment World. (kind of like the Cypber World) Kriss and Susie would wake up and accidentally walk on set of something Tenna was making. Tenna will do this big introduction, go on about how entertainment is an art, how he'll get written into history if there'd be two lighteners in his "show" (which would later be the final boss battle) and run off to immediately start writing a script.
Kris and Susie will be able to wander around the set and find Gigi hiding behind a big box of props, Kris will be able to comfort them, which will make Gigi immediately glue themselves to Kris' and Susie's sides.
While exploring The Entertainment World, Gigi will help with puzzles and distracting enemies in the overworld (They will not help in battle though) and clue you towards items that are well hidden around this world.
You'll also get more lore about The Entertainment World the more you explore it. (to simplify it bc i haven't worked it out 100% yet) Tenna's control of this world has spiraled out of control, he's involving everyone he wants into his plays whether they want it or not, and how Gigi is among those people and isn't actually a clown.
After defeating Tenna, all the friends you made along the way will be joining Kris and Susie at Castletown, including Gigi! You'll find them digging holes with Lancer, who's somehow able to completely understand their squeaks.
Back in the light world, you'll be able to find a small and dirty stuffed rabbit besides Asgore's flower shop, taking the rabbit with you would create a new possible interaction with a mystery person (one i'm not going to say all too much about because i'm hoping to make a comic of it!)
thanks for reading my incoherent story if you did btw!
Part 4 YES I ADDED BACKGROUND COLOR
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I don't wanna be the puppet that your playing on the strings
It's all going according to plan until Susie decides to leave
Chara: "Frisk, who put you in charge of the lights?!" 😠
Kris + Frisk: "..."
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I can't believe I am finally uploading this! ;w;
This was one of the hardest drawings for me in a while to finally get to finish. I don't care that we are in the new year now, this was supposed to originally be uploaded before then, so I am counting this as my December post!... Which means... I have to try to also upload something else for this month! :'D
Moving on... so I decided to re-design and draw Kris again. The last time I had (at least publicly) was in 2018, so it has definitely been some time. I debated whether to show their eyes, and I ended up just going with "yes" cause I liked the energy it added to the art. But man, if I thought just getting the time to finish and finally upload this was hard, let's talk about just sketching the stupid thing. Drawing characters interacting like this is always tricky (for me at least), so I was stuck in the sketching phase for such a long time. Regardless, I finally finished and that is all that matters! Happy (late) Holidays! 🎄
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I have missed you so.
D E L T A R U N E
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Guys STFU‼️‼️
They're doing their group project
Uh-oh.
*You are a little embarassed...
*Ralsei, on the other hand, is having a whole existencial crisis
wanted to paint something as stress relief
Guysz new Deltaroon theeory
Varik Earthbound Halloween Hack is Kris "Deltarune" Dreemur's REAL FATHER