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BEFORE THE FIGHT

Oh Ms Beautiful Ms Beautiful

Oh Ms Beautiful, Ms Beautiful

How many times have you fallen into the same spot? 

Implementing strategies, you think they are right

And some others, mistakenly understood, your purpose and the right

Be brave! Be brave

Only heroes in their own characters stand the weight

And the purpose of your own inside the mess

Fight, the fight for you

For your principles

For your career

Fight, the good fight

But do not let them win the fight

Of liberating a mind, in a conflicted spot

Of a broken mind

For women of color, being marginalized, dismissed, and othered comes with the territory. Being involved in Mormon Feminism is often the same thing on a different day. We sigh deeply at the criticism and soldier on, doing what we must. We claim ourselves, we drive ourselves to succeed, and we derive our value from something greater than an institution.

Trine Thomas Nelson. Quote taken from Mormon Feminism, edited by Joanna Brooks, Rachel Hunt Steenblik, and Hannah Wheelwright. (via oupacademic)

Writing Affirmations, submitted by Camp NaNoWriMo participants. (Text reads: “I will not let fear, frustration, and perfectionism stifle me. I will show up at the page and try.” By NaNoWriMo user Crizma)

What Is an Inciting Incident? Learn How to Write a Great One

Inciting incidents hook readers. They take stories in an entirely new direction or get the plot moving faster.

It’s the moment when Lucy discovers Narnia in the wardrobe or Gandalf introduces the thirteen dwarves to Bilbo.

Every great story has a fascinating inciting incident. Here are a few tips to come up with your own.

What Is an Inciting Incident?

An inciting incident is an event that causes chaos or change in the protagonist’s life. It kickstarts the story’s plot by compelling the protagonist forward. This can happen in the first chapter of a novel or the first few pages of a short story.

There are also three types of inciting incidents:

Coincidental: an event that’s unexpected or accidental. (Someone finds gold in their backyard or crashes their car into another vehicle and finds out their best friend was the other driver.)

Causal: an action or event the protagonist chooses to do. (Your protagonist files for divorce or gives in to their lifelong urge to start a restaurant.)

Off-page: an event that happens before the story starts or outside of the protagonist’s experience. (A country drops a bomb on the protagonist’s hometown while they’re at work one day or the protagonist’s best friend goes missing ten years before your story starts.)

Tips for Writing Inciting Plot Points

Now that you know the two types of inciting incidents, use these tips to create plot-activating moments that make your audience buckle in for a long night of reading.

1. Make the Protagonist’s World Flip

A great inciting incident causes a significant imbalance in your protagonist’s life. They should start making decisions or changes they wouldn’t have before as they respond to the incident. 

Consider the almost-car-crash in Twilight. Sure, you could argue that moving to Forks is the inciting incident for Bella. It’s definitely the first incident that gets the plot going, but the story only shifts into vampire mode when Edward saves her from getting hit in the school’s parking lot. She notices his insane strength and speed, so she starts questioning who he is.

The inhuman features that intrigue Bella also hook the reader. You keep reading to find out how she discovers he’s a vampire and when/how the big reveal happens.

Her discovery that vampires exist also changes how she interacts with and understands her world. It radically alters her life path, well before she gets to know his family or the other supernatural beings in Forks.

2. Keep the Magnitude a Mystery

Sometimes major life moments happen and we don’t realize how significant they are. You could bump into a person at the grocery store, only to recognize them at a farmer’s market a week later and start a conversation. That person might be your future romantic partner who changes your life, but you don’t realize that while you’re standing between shelves of pasta and spaghetti sauce.

Don’t be afraid of leaving your inciting incident a mystery to your protagonist. Moments of excitement or terror can be great for starting your plot, but sometimes a hint of mystery intrigues readers too.

3. Align the Incident With Your Theme

You might know what your character is going to experience on their journey to the plot resolution but have no idea what your inciting incident should be.

If you can’t think of something, consider your theme. What event or circumstance would start your protagonist on a learning journey that exemplifies your theme?

Let’s imagine a scenario where you’re writing a coming-of-age story. Ultimately, you want your protagonist to recognize they have no control over their lives and find security in the community they build around themselves.

To make that initial loss of control happen, you could pick an inciting incident like someone breaking into their home. During the robbery, the criminal accidentally sets the house on fire. Your protagonist’s family loses everything and has to start over.

This event would align with your protagonist’s inner conflict. Focusing on inner conflict can be another perspective if you’re unsure what your theme is.

Let’s say your protagonist wants to go to college to provide for their family, but they get kicked off of their soccer team for cheating on a test. A soccer scholarship is the only way they could to college, but that chance disappears forever. They have to make a series of choices after that to find a new way to pay for college, which is the rest of your plot.

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Inciting incidents are important, so try thinking about yours apart from your stories. When they carry thematic weight or flip your protagonist’s world upside down, you’ll know you’ve created an incident that will hook your readers.

When human beings encounter the true meaning of life and purpose, there are no doubts. Soul and body are compromising together to give the best in a beautiful way

La Pregunta Existencial

-      Que usted piensa… Existo o no existo?

-      Por que la pregunta?

-      BUENO, SI PIENSO, LUEGO EXISTO, VERDAD? Siendo Descartes; es decir, no tengo que tener un atributo que otros me otorgan para existir. No va de acuerdo?

-      No entiendo!

-      Si!, a lo que me refiero es que mi existencia no esta condicionada a lo que usted pueda pensar de mi, porque aunque pensara de mi, de manera diferente, y digamos que pudiera en algun momento ocultarme tras bambalinas, aun con ello, yo existo!

Me sigue?

-      Correcto!

-      Entonces la existencia no esta condicionada a otros, sino la existencia viene de la presencia, de ser o no ser, esa es la cuestion! Yo existo porque soy lo que soy como soy porque soy como soy, es decir, soy real, palpable, tengo una voz, expreso lo que pienso, no utilizo geroglificos ni dibujos ni imagenes porque tengo una presencia real, no soy fake, yo soy yo.

-      Oiga y yo existo si tengo una audiencia?

-      Que usted piensa?

-      Existo porque me hacen, o existo porque soy? Dependeria mi valor, del valor que otros me den o del valor que yo mismo me otorgo porque soy? Es decir, yo tengo una expression, yo tengo una serie de trabajos que hablan de mi y lo que soy, entonces existo.

Y la verdad de las cosas es que no hace un trabajo por el reconocimiento de las gentes, lo hace pork le gusta hacer lo que hace, le gusta perfeccionar lo que hace, los retos son con uno mismo y no contra otros, y en ello encuentra gusto y gozo.

Usrted dejaria de hacer algo que le agrada por circunstancias ajenas a usted?

Dejaria de ser maestro porque no tiene ninos?

Dejaria de ser doctor porque no tiene pacientes?

Dejaria de ser mecanico porque no existe carro que arreglar?

Que ustred piensa?