WRITING TIP!!!

WRITING TIP!!!

if you're struggling to connect paragraphs, or if something doesn't feel right, or there is something that is bothering you about the way the story doesn't seem to be aligning - READ IT OUT LOUD!!!

read the entire paragraph. over and over. hell, read the whole draft, from the first page to the page you're stuck at. until you figure out what you want to happen in the paragraph, how you want it to happen, and how to word it. honest to god, it has been such a helpful little thing for me.

it also is extremely useful if the narrator has an accent or an eccentric way of speaking.

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3 years ago

watching ppl interact with their mutuals is like thirdwheeling your two friends who take you with them on their date cuz they pitied you and you're like ok! thanks! while they're furiously making out in front of you


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3 years ago
Why Tho???

why tho???

literally dont get it cuz we never find out anything about mucho. just that he runs a division in toman which isnt under any guidance and regulation of mikey and apparently he had a close and perhaps intimate relationship with sanzu.

the other members also dont seem that close with him. we rarely see them mention mucho nor do we see much of him with them.

and yet, he's an important person to mikey for what??? what did he do??? how did he impact mikey so much to the point that he would consider mucho an important person to him?? i dont get it.

also he got killed off so fast. did we even get a backstory? i dont remember if we did.


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3 years ago

this was so relatable the first time i read the mangas

This Was So Relatable The First Time I Read The Mangas

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1 year ago

it's so mindblowing to me that there are ppl who arent obsessed with the shows or movies they watch or who arent in like any fandoms. like my friends are so nonchalant about the show they've watched or manhwa they've read because what's ??? the ??? point ??? if ??? your ??? not gonna??? squeal and giggle and kick your feet when a character does something nice for their loved ones???!?!?!?!!?!?!?!

WHATS THE POINT IF YOU DONT INTERNALISE A CHARACTERS PERSONALITY TO THE POINT THAT YOU JUST CONSIDER THEM AS YOUR OWN CHILD???!! WHATS THE POINT IF YOU DONT SHARE THEIR PAIN??? IF YOU DONT CRY WHEN THEY CRY???


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11 months ago

so i did this

So I Did This

then, for shits n giggles, i thought, why don't i put myself??

then this happened

So I Did This

yeah... didnt expect to get attacked like that😀

3 years ago

also i have a feeling hes gonna name his kids after mikey

somehow

idk how

mikey 2.0???

mikey but spelled differently like the name mikey gives him???

Pls He's Such A Softie. This Just Speaks To How Sweet He Rlly Is, He Couldve Easily Ignored The Kids

pls he's such a softie. this just speaks to how sweet he rlly is, he couldve easily ignored the kids but he didnt. he tried to help them calm down and stop crying. he views himself as useless even though the steps he took would say otherwise. sure he might not have been successful in trying to get the kids to stop crying but the thing that matters is he tried to make the situation better.

thats better than just standing around and witnessing a kid getting lost from their parents.

he's naturally this kind and caring.

(he'd make a good father too. hina rlly did bag the most kind-hearted man.)


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3 years ago

THE LITTLE THINGS

- the things they do that make you fall even deeper into the pits of their love [tokyorev fluff <3 just the boys being sweethearts that love you to bits].

- includes: baji, chifuyu, & mitsuya

THE LITTLE THINGS

- BAJI likes to lift up your hands and cover them in kisses, a small testament to his unwavering love. You could be studying, talking, or doing just about anything when he decides to pull a sneak attack on your palms, kissing them until your skin goes numb.

- CHIFUYU always helps you with your hair. Wether it be taming it in the morning or helping you dry it after a shower, he’s always a big help. He’s really good at styling it too, and can whip out a braid in under a minute.

- MITSUYA makes you things; anything and everything you want, he can do. You need some new clothes? He’s got your measurements down by heart. You want a stuffed toy? He’ll whip one out in a flash. He loves giving you gifts and assisting you in your own sewing endeavors.

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THE LITTLE THINGS
3 years ago

another hc: luna and mana always give makeovers to nahoya and souta whenever they comeover. and i mean ALWAYS. they will braid their hair, try to brush it, straighten it and one time even managed to force a wig upon their head. souya doesnt mind it but nahoya literally vibrates in his seat because he hates it when someone messes up his hair.

mitsuya obviously has fun with this. he will deliberately place certain objects on low surfaces so luna and mana can easily find them.

they use their mother's makeup set to put lipstick on their lips, orange and blue eyeshadows, fake lashes (nahoya is scared shitless of those things) and blush and whatever else!

luna gets nahoya because she can talk back to him.

"next up: eyelash curler!"

"oi, you're not putting that anywhere on my face!"

"it won't hurt, you big baby."

"im not a baby!"

"prove it ,then."

mana and souya are literally the cutest. they work together to bring glam to souya's face. souya suggests some colors and mana tries to find it and when she cant, souya gently guides her toward it. they will laugh and giggle and have the most fun while their siblings on the other side are struggling to put on a bit of powder (it gets all over nahoya's face).

i have found another relationship to appreciate

I Have Found Another Relationship To Appreciate
I Have Found Another Relationship To Appreciate

these two big bros

i love love love to imagine how these two started to interact cuz theyre the older brothers in their family and toman. draken, chifuyu, baji, and kazutora all have the "only child syndrome", mikey is the middle child mess, we dont know anything about mucho's life and i think practically everyone ignores him and sanzu. so among the mess they found themselves in, these two created a tight bond no one ever expected.

their contrasting nature works: mitsuya with his polite way of talking, respects everyone unless they give him a reason not to, and generally is a friendly nice guy while smiley has a rough way with his language, disregards anyone who is not worth his time and once you peel back the layers is just as amiable as his twin. yet they share that responsibility of being the big brother, of taking care of their younger sibling/s. they get each other.

i imagine the day the kawata twins were introduced, nahoya and mitsuya locked eyes and nodded cuz they have that "older sibling" vibe to them that only the other one gets. they just went "i feel u, bro" and left mikey and draken to wonder wtf is going on.

they can also telepathically communicate!!! whenever one of them is having a rough time, the other acknowledges it and tries to destress them. nahoya catches mitsuya struggling to be strong and offers him a handkerchief, tells him its okay to cry it out. one day, mitsuya happens to stumble upon one of the kawata twins arguments and gently intervenes, explaining to souya that his brother just wants him to be safe and telling nahoya that he doesnt have to raise his voice and could also explain things in a soft voice because souya is not a three year old anymore.

i also would like to imagine these two eat together and just talk about the hilarious stuff their siblings have done or advice each other on how to get them to sleep quicker or what to give them for their birthdays.

"luna tricked mana into letting her cut her hair yesterday."

"seriously? man, shes got -"

"nahoya."

"confidence. shes got the confidence that every girl should have."

mitsuya sighs. "gods know what mom wouldve done to me if she saw half of mana's hair gone."

they just get along with each other and its a mystery to others. their bond became so close that they swore to take care of each others siblings in case something happens to them.

naturally, them being close also meant souya and luna and mana see each other very often. they get together every once in a while and although souya is older than luna and mana, the three of them are a pact and already have inside jokes. oh and hakkai's there too.


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