L. V., i found this poem in the middle of a script no one will ever read
I love your 'in my drafts' and 'combing through my old poems' posts because as a non-writer (is that even a thing?) it's interesting to see like it's the behind the scenes of a movie. The drafts are especially intriguing. They feel raw and like I'm not supposed to be seeing it but you're letting us take a peek of your writing process. It feels like a secret.
It's a thing now, haha! Thank you for telling me this. I was very hesitant posting those because they might not be pretty enough or something along those lines. But I adore your description. I call it my "poetic autopsy" of sorts, but I like the behind-the-scenes analogy better. And that's the "feeling" I was aiming for with the drafts. To feel "raw", unedited, the emotions and thoughts allowed to run free, finally untethered—and if any of them come back to me, I'll be here to welcome them with open arms.
maybe you don't need anyone to share them with
Took me a while to realise you were referring to this post.
...but what if I want someone to share the happiness with?
L. V., i found this poem when the moon was just the moon
L. V., i found this poem when we were no longer lonely
L. V., i found this poem stuck between the lines of your last text message
i love your work, fellow poet!
i do ask,
where do you draw your inspiration from the most?
Thank you! These days, it's mostly random everyday moments. Like when I was about to cross the road, a man looked at me from the other side and he had His eyes, so I turned around and took the long route to where I was going.
I'll be going through your poetry once I get some free time :)
But also, where do you get yours?
L. V., idk how to let you go
L. V., i found this poem in the hands of a bored god
Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)
I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha
Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!
No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3
Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.
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