If You're Trying To Get Into The Head Of Your Story's Antagonist, Try Writing An "Am I The Asshole" Reddit

if you're trying to get into the head of your story's antagonist, try writing an "Am I the Asshole" reddit post from their perspective, explaining their problems and their plans for solving them. Let the voice and logic come through.

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1 month ago

Ooo I loved this! It gave me the chills. It felt so visual to, I could just visualize each scene.

[2]	As a child, you bathe in the river that nourishes the town, letting its water clean you. When you emerge, you are dirty again. No, not “again”—the water has always been filthy and so have you. There has never been a time when you weren’t coated in dirt. You wonder why your mother has brought you here but you don’t ask. She will bring you back tomorrow, washing you again with her own dirty hands.

[3]	It’s Sunday again, although you do not remember a day when it wasn’t. It’s always Sunday.
[4]	Your college algebra professor stands at the front of the silent room, scrawling an equation on the board. He turns to the audience of students and asks, “how can we carve the rot from our souls when it is all that we are?” He is looking at you expectantly and you now notice that you are the only student in the room, sitting at the sole desk in its center. The equation on the board is not an equation but a statement. We are all rotten creatures. You don’t know the answer; you never know the answer.
[5]	There is no harvest this year, save for the blackberries that are always growing. You can’t remember the last time it rained, it’s been years. The river is dry and no one else is worried. The ground in town remains damp and when you question this, your mother shushes you and tells you to eat your dinner. It’s a bowl of blackberries. It’s always a bowl of blackberries and your hands are always stained.
[6]	This time, it’s Monday and you sit in college algebra, opening the exam before you. There is only one question typed on the page: “Does the filth you coat yourself in from the river cover the rot? Would a clean river absolve you?”  You look up to find yourself alone in the classroom; the professor is gone and the board is empty. When you look back down at the desk, there is no trace of the exam that had been sitting on it. The next day is Sunday again.

— An extra-narrative writing exercise based on my work, The Taste of Hallowed Earth


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1 month ago

Writing update 5/8/2025

It's time for another writing update. Still working on Every Hero Needs a Villain, my object head project. I'm making my way through the character bios. I am trying to just get the basics down, then I'll go over them again and add more personality. Here's Spark's description, because I thought it was cute:

They have a gently yellow and ruffled lamp shade with a lighter and brighter light bulb on their head. They typically wear a skirt that matches paired with a lighter blouse or suit top. Their clothes typically having a shimmering or glittery component to them. They sometimes wear different lamp shades for different effects, having a particular fondness for colorful glass lamp shades for special events, or cloth dotted lamp shades when they're feeling cute. Sometimes they don't even wear a lamp shade for emphasis.

I definitely want to edit it for readability, but so far so good! I hope to have all the bios down by the end of the week, and will notify y'all on Sunday if this is the case.

Taglist: @aweirdshipp, @floofyboi57, @aralithmenathere


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1 month ago
Sorry To Have To Tell You This But If A Stranger Comes To Your Inbox Or Slides In Your DMs Asking You

sorry to have to tell you this but if a stranger comes to your inbox or slides in your DMs asking you for your money with some sob story, no matter how tragic and convincing the story is, they are a scammer — especially if the story is obviously copied and pasted, formatted in the exact same way as the other 100 bots in your inbox

1 month ago

Btw, I am in the process of making a more detailed survey for this.

Speaking of, tempted to make a community myself, but since I have a variety of unconnected works, I have no idea what that would be a community for. Kind of reminds me of the idea I had to try and get myself posting again, mainly making like, a sort of dating sim kind of group of characters to play around with.

Y'all want me to make object head people for you to kiss? SFUIHSFU

3 weeks ago

For reference, here is last week's update. Let me know if anyone wants to be added to the taglist.

Writing Update 5/15/2025

Hi hi! For the most part, I've finished the hero side of the worldbuilding. I mostly just have to think of more holidays. Anyways, here are the categories of heroes for anyone interested (keep in mind this is a draft that needs more polish):

Commons - Heroes that represent common hopes and dreams.

Pinnacles - Heroes that represent hopes that are achievable, but need a lot of work to become reality, and depend highly on the direction of the future. This can include heroes that represent concepts like world peace or futuristic technology.

Ambitions - Heroes that represent hopes and dreams that are more personal, such as hopes for one's family, personal goals, and so on.

Unattainables - Heroes that represent human desires or dreams which can not be attained. Some are obvious like those based on things like flying or shape shifting dreams, while others are more abstract and connect to humans attempting to disregard their humanity.

Tag list: @aweirdshipp, @floofyboi57, @aralithmenathere

2 weeks ago

The symbolism in this one had me by a death grip. I could picture it so clearly in my head, and I like how it serves as a metaphor for unhealthy relationships. Ones where X takes too much and ends up hurting Y, which hurts X in turn. Or maybe a relationship where Y reacts poorly to love, and X is made to feel like a monster/guilty for it. But, that's just my intepretation.

I spit my teeth into your mouth

so I wouldn't bit your lip

and while your tongue led mine in an aggressive tango

all 28 of them slid down your throat

My canines catch

and rip holes in your esophagus

and my molars create a blockage

at the entrance of your stomach

When our lips leave each other

I grace you with a bloody smile

that stains my white blouse

and drips onto the tile

But my mouth closes when I see the fear on your face

and the pain in your breath

and as my hands meet your's at your throat

I am left with a mountain of regret


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1 month ago

On the subject of non AI resources, I assure you that if you make it clear you will actually support non AI versions of something, people will make it. People often want to put in the time and energy to make these resources, they're just hesitant to because they fear no one will use them. Do not get me started on how many character blogs there are out there for popular characters that get no asks or interactions whatsoever, because people would rather use character.ai.

"I have social anxiety", I get it, I really do. And yes, a part of keeping these none AI resources alive is you have to stop being a lurker and actually interact with them. It can be scary, but I assure you it is worth it to let the people who create these resources shine.


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