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otvoaeb
9 months ago
A black and white, inky-looking fancomic for Omniscient reader's viewpoint. All the speech bubbles look like text bubbles from a messenger, specifically midday tryst. They all have a symbol signaling if those texts were read. Most of them are unread.
In a coffin lays Kim Dokja in his stark white coat. A text bubble is covering his face completely. It's a call to him - it says "Kim Dokja."
Next frame is Yoo Joonghyuk looking down at him, with his face, too, hidden behind the text. Above his is the heavy, dark sky.
"Han Sooyoung told me to stop paying for midday tryst."
Presumably a flashback to the conversation - Yoo Joonghyuk standing in front of Han Sooyoung, who is sitting with her feet on the chair, a laptop with an open word document on her lap. She is pointing at him with a lollipop in accusatory manner.
Yoo Joonghyuk is quoting Han Sooyoung here: "Use a notepad. Like the reast of us". Her words, again, cover both of their faces.
Next frame is Han Sooyoung showing off a tattered notepad with first page filled up with someone's writing.
"For someone you kept around she is surprisingly clueless."
"Her notepad was full of your notes. Was it even hers to begin with?"
Yoo Joonghyuk's hand is reaching towards the notepad, but Han Sooyoung retracts her hand. 
"She didn't let me check."
Han Sooyoung is shown holding the notepad gently, carefully. Text bubbles cover her expression completely.
"I saw its well-loved pages."
"She wouldn't care that much if it was hers."
Both Han Sooyoung and Yoo Joonghyuk are standing in front of a giant portrait of Kim Dokja in an ornate frame. Han Sooyoung is watching it, while Yoo Joonghyuk is watching her.
The text bubble covers Kim Dokja's eyes, but not his serene smile.
"I think..."
"She also can't let go."
First frame is Yoo Joonghyuk's profile showing his tired, weary eyes. The speech bubble covers his mouth, and it's the first read one:
"She'd say".
Next is, again, unread, seemingly a side note to Yoo Joonghyuk's monologue:
"If she was in a lyrical mood".
Next frame is a statue of Kim Dokja, a crumbling figure with his hands in a gesture of an embrace, a gentle smile on his face. Han Sooyoung is reaching up towards it, as if tracing his fractured face with her fingers.
"Your absence"
"Is revered as sacred."
Han Sooyoung's quote continues: 
"Since your presence was lesser than none." with Yoo Joonghyuk's addition of "Big words like these don't suit her."
Accompanying it is a shot of Han Sooyoung and Yoo Joonghyuk laying on the ground with Kim Dokja's shadow being cast in the empty space between them. At the edges of the frame there are cropped out heads, seemingly belonging to other versions of Han Sooyoung and Yoo Joonghyuk.
Next frame is a shot of a wall with many photographs  of Kim Dokja's companions pinned to it. Kim Dokja's hands are pinning Yoo Joonghyuk's and Han Sooyoung's photos. Between all the photos there are white threads, connecting them all, making the composition look like a chaotic spiderweb.
"It did shape our connection."
"Your absence, i mean."
It is revealed that above that composition made out of kimcom's photos there is a picture of Kim Dokja. All the white thread lead up to it, covering his face in the process, but at the same time they are interrupted by the text bubble, and it is a read one:
"After all, we share an object of mourning."
Two vertical frames, both featuring Kim Dokja mirroring himself. On the left it's Kim Dokja with a hidden face standing under starry sky. His shadow is appearing as a dotted line - or a line of train carriages. 
On the right is Kim Dokja's vague shape reflecting in a glass window of a bookshop, noticed by Yoo Joonghyuk, who is surrounded by other members of kimcom, including Mia. That Kim Dokja is smiling.
"Your inheritance for us"
"Was survivor's guilt"
"In a shape of a smile."
Kim Dokja is now laying in a hospital bed. It's bright and bathed in sunlight, but his face is hidden by a speech bubble. It is also a read one: "Your so-called happy ending -".
A shot of Yoo Joonghyuk dark silhouette in the door of Kim Dokja's room, his white coat visible, hanging on the chair next to the bed.
"Salvation of the last man standing,"
Yoo Joonghyuk leaves, a heavy shadow completely hiding his face now.
"And as you said, the price was way too high."
Whole page is focused on Yoo Joonghyuk. His face is desperate, empty, as if he's on the very edge of no return, staring into the empty space in front of him with hands almost cradling the speech bubble calling for Kim Dokja.
"Kim Dokja."
"I think i can't pay the interest. It's far too high."
A closer shot of Yoo Joonghyuk. He is looking up with hands locked in a gesture of a prayer. His face is as desperate and hollow as on the previous page. The text bubble hide Yoo Joonghyuk's mouth.
"I cannot let go on my own."
A shot of Han Sooyoung sitting with her legs up on a chair, almost curling onto herself, watching the laptop sitting on her stomach. Her experssion is unclear, hidden by her hair. The light from the laptop is sparkly, filled with little stars.
The read text says: "I am sure Han Sooyoung can fix it."
Next one is unread: "Who else if not her".

All the read messages combined say:
"She'd say: after all, we share an object of mourning. Your so-called happy ending. I am sure Han Sooyoung can fix it".
otvoaeb
9 months ago

naming a character is like naming a child, except this child can potentially lead a revolution, save the world, or die in chapter three.

otvoaeb
9 months ago
A simple black and white comic of characters from Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint. Kim Dokja makes three indents using a spoon on cup ice cream to resemble a calm smiling face (Two closed eyes and one smile) while Han Sooyoung looks from his side. He holds it up when Yoo Sangah passes by and she makes the same face as the ice cream. waw..

waw....

Based off this lovely tweet

A tweet by user @hanewroo on twitter, showing a smiley face indented onto cup ice cream
otvoaeb
9 months ago

The 5 swords of Hua

The 5 Swords Of Hua

Their swords will keep on blooming as long as they are together 🌸

This is a repost. Please help me find the artist.

otvoaeb
9 months ago
My Full Piece For @jdlogbook !! What If I Took You On A House Tour And There Was A Big Prophetic Mural

My full piece for @jdlogbook !! What if I took you on a house tour and there was a big prophetic mural of you killing me in the foyer 🤍

Extra sales are still happening!

otvoaeb
9 months ago

Let yourself be self indulgent

Writing is the one time you can be completely self indulgent without having to feel even a little bit bad about it.

Embrace it! Let yourself wallow, explore, overthink, test your boundaries. Opening yourself up to the experience is the mark of a great writer.

otvoaeb
9 months ago

lowkey guys, remember to write for yourself too. i abandoned my favorite wip of all time for two years because i thought other people wouldn’t like it. that sucked, and i decided to stop caring if other people will think it’s weird and write what i like. it’s made me a lot happier since i’ve accepted that

otvoaeb
9 months ago

I just think people write out of obligation too often.

"How do I motivate myself to write through the boring part of my story?"

"How do I make this boring scene not boring?"

Don't write it.

Don't write boring things just because you think the structure of the story demands it. I promise it doesn't need to be there.

If your characters need to have gone shopping for a later part of the story to make sense you can just have a sentence about how they went shopping and move on.

You are not obligated to write the boring parts. No matter what those parts are.

You are not obligated to make the parts of your story that you're not excited to write interesting somehow.

You can just write the fun and interesting parts and gloss over and summarize boring things.

Your audience will thank you and you will thank yourself.

otvoaeb
9 months ago
When The Moon Can Be Seen During The Day

When the moon can be seen during the day

otvoaeb
9 months ago
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{ Couples in order of appearance: Hualian from "Tian Guan Ci Fu," Wangxian from "Mo Dao Zu Shi," Bingyuan from "The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System," Yanshen from "Qian Qiu," Fengcui from "Wushuang," Ranwan from "Erha," Ximang from "Yuwu," Changgu from "Sha Po Lang," Cezhou from "Qiang Jin Jiu," and Moshang from "The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System," Fengqing from "Tian Guan Ci Fu,” Wenzhou from “Tian Ya Ke,” }

otvoaeb
9 months ago

Chu Wanning (plagued by horny thoughts): Better read a book to calm down.

The book: Mo Ran has a massive dick!

Chu Wanning (plagued By Horny Thoughts): Better Read A Book To Calm Down.

Absolute unit. Truly awe-inspiring.

otvoaeb
9 months ago

The 5 swords of Hua

The 5 Swords Of Hua

Their swords will keep on blooming as long as they are together 🌸

This is a repost. Please help me find the artist.

otvoaeb
9 months ago
New Official Hualian Art From The Tgcf Revised Edition

new official hualian art from the tgcf revised edition <3

otvoaeb
9 months ago
This Is Why Writers Abandon Stories. It’s Not That We Don’t Love Them, It’s Because We Don’t

This is why writers abandon stories. It’s not that we don’t love them, it’s because we don’t want to love them alone.

otvoaeb
9 months ago

With their slutty waist.

With Their Slutty Waist.
otvoaeb
9 months ago

Tony: So today I learned that peter has me in his cellphone as "Mr Irondad "

Clint: *shrugs* Could be worse. Wanda and Pietro have each other down as "spare parts"

otvoaeb
9 months ago

The real barbie is Y/n.

Y/n’s a doctor, a cop, a scientist, an agent, vet, hero, villain, astronaut, lawyer, spy, criminal, artist, chef, engineer, psychologist, architect, journalist, firefighter, event planner, mechanic, photographer, musician, actor, interior designer, bartender, fashion designer, barista, florist, forensic scientist, flight attendant, profiler, tour guide, translator, etc.

otvoaeb
9 months ago

fanfic writers are so fucking awesome in the sense that they can take one single scene, that lasts less than a minute, from the source material and turn that one single scene into a 40k word long fic with depth, feels, character study and development and create a whole storyline out of that one single canonical moment.

fanfic writers are so fucking awesome in the sense that they can take one single scene, that lasts less than a minute, from the source material and write 40 entirely different fics about that one single canonical moment and each one of those fics are literal masterpieces.

shout out to us fanfic writers ♡♡♡♡♡♡

otvoaeb
9 months ago

people always talk about leaving comments on ao3 like it's a nice thing to do, or the best way to encourage writers to keep writing, or overall like it's how you Do Your Part in fandom

and yeah, all those things are true, but having spent the past few months leaving enthusiastic comments on as many things as i can, i have a different perspective

you should leave comments on fics because it's fun

taking the time to stop and focus on what i like about a story has made me way more aware of what's going on in stories and what i like about them. there's bit more actual comprehension and appreciation and not just beaming content into my eyes to fill time

i like noticing cool little things in fics, or riffing on funny events. i've never been very good at speculating or picking apart characters, but sometimes something clicks and it rocks.

and of course it's pretty nice when you get a response and it's clear you've made another person happy

so yeah, you should leave comments for your own sake, too. it makes reading better!

otvoaeb
9 months ago

The fact that Yoohyun and Yoojin are equally (but differently relative to each other) crazy. And wild. And weird. And scary. Both of them. If Yoohyun destroyed the world, Yoojin would find an excuse. If Yoojin destroyed the world, Yoohyun would think the world wasn't worthy of his brother

otvoaeb
1 year ago
ao3 screenshot: "morally dissapointed, yet impressed"

(x)

otvoaeb
1 year ago

personally, I think people are allowed to ship a “toxic ship” as long as it’s fictional and they can separate fiction from reality. shipping a fictional “problematic ship” doesn’t mean you’re “abuse apologist” in real life. the same way people who enjoy fictional villains are not “murderers” in real life.

it’s okay if you think this ship makes you uncomfortable and so you personally dislike it. what you can and should do is avoid their contents and refrain from interacting with people who do ship them. that mute and block buttons are your friends.

what you shouldn’t do, though, is harass people who ship them and brag about how they’re “red flags irl” and how you’re “morally superior” simply because of fictional characters.

I promise you, minding your own business and not caring about what ship strangers on the internet ship will make your fandom so much less toxic and a whole lot more enjoyable.

otvoaeb
1 year ago

AO3 writers when canon sucks:

AO3 Writers When Canon Sucks:
otvoaeb
1 year ago

lol since this has to be said again; constructive criticism is good only when it’s explicitly asked for by the creators.

if they didn’t ask for one then no, you’re not giving your favorite AO3 writer “constructive criticism” to help them improve their writing, by listing the things you want fixed in their work in the comment. you’re giving them the orders of what you want and what you think they should write for you for free. you’re being self-centered and rude and, instead of “motivating” them to write more, you’re discouraging them and are making them consider stopping writing or sharing their works altogether.

unless the author specifically asked you for constructive criticism, keep that to yourself and either tell them nice things or don’t say anything at all.

a reminder that fanfic writers write as their hobby, for free. they’re not writing in order to sell their works. they’re writing because they’re passionate about the characters and the stories, and most importantly, they’re writing for themselves. they’re only allowing you — the reader — to read their work as a gift because they were hoping they could make your day a little better. but they’re writing for themselves. they’re not writing to please you or anybody.

if you don’t like the gift or if you don’t have anything positive to say about the gift you were given, there’s literally zero reason for you to make sure the person, who’s kind enough to give you a gift, knows how you dislike their gift or how you think the gift could be “better”. that is just unnecessary and extremely rude.

otvoaeb
1 year ago

Trust me, you don’t wanna know how much and how exactly I fantasize about men.

otvoaeb
1 year ago

Saving these until I finally decide to write a reborn fanfic

I know it sounds weird but I am in need of Italian words/phrasings the Papas would say to each other in the middle of an argument or fight. Or just annoyed and don't want to talk or do something they are asked to.

Things on the line off fuck off, dickhead and so on.

This is actually a really good question, too. Not weird at all. A few choices:

“Va a farti fottere!” - get fucked, go get fucked, fuck off

“Testa di cazzo” - literally dickhead

“Fottuto” - fuckface, fucker, stupid fuck

“Non rompere” or “non rompermi i coglioni” - Stop busting my balls, don’t break my balls (stop bothering/annoying me)

“Mi stai sulle palle” - You fucking piss me off/bug the shit out of me

The famous “Vaffanculo” is a bit controversial, because although it’s intended as “fuck you,” there’s a slight edge of homophobia to it, since it literally means “go fuck somebody’s ass.” Having said that, few in Italy really use it in that sense consciously…they really are just saying “fuck you.”

“Fratellaccio del culo” - a fun one because you’re saying “stupidass brother”

“Sei pieno di merda” - you’re full of shit

“Sono cazzate” or “che stronzata”- this is bullshit

“Ma va!” - believe it or not, in the right inflection, this short expression means “don’t be ridiculous”

“Mentecatto” - another way to say “idiot”

“Non si combina niente qui!” - we aren’t resolving anything!

Hope this helps! As always, if you need a direct translation of anything for your particular fic, feel free to send me a message (not an inbox ask, since I have to answer those publicly).

Also, the usual disclaimers apply: nobody’s perfect, I also use regional phrases, happy to be corrected if I screw up, etc.


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otvoaeb
1 year ago

The thing about khr is that they don’t make more fics about the adults. Like you know, the arcos?? I would die just to read a good fic about Fon/Reborn with one-sided Skull. The potential of an obsessive jealous Skull but Fon and Reborn just can’t keep their hands off each other??

Or like a Verde/Reborn although idk how that works??


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otvoaeb
1 year ago

The thing about the not canon but definitely canon ships is that there is room for imagination. The author gives you enough to imagine but doesn’t give you exactly what you need so you imagine.


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otvoaeb
1 year ago

I feel like I need more iron dad and spider son fics


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otvoaeb
1 year ago

I want to write a fic but my mind just can’t continue one thought


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