No, the Boltons are dead. What? Jon Snow came down from Castle Black with a wildling army and won the Battle of the Bastards. He’s King in the North now. You’re lying.
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Jax Teller Imagine WARNING: Some cursing
Shiloh paitently waited for Jax to come in. She stared at the white walls, wondering if she should even be doing this. Shi began to sit up straight as she heard the buzzer to the door. Jax walked in, not looking at her once. The police officer step outside, closing door. Jax looked her in the eyes, his face emotionless. Shiloh took a deep breath before saying everything she wanted to him. "I came here thinking I could look you in the eyes… but I can’t.“ She stated. Jax didn’t reply. The two of them sat in silence, Shiloh had prepared everything she was going to say. She was more than ready, that was until Jax came in. "I know that your wife died… and it was hard for you. It was hard for all of us. But Jax that does not mean that justifies your actions. Going out there and accussing everyone for something so serious like that.” Shiloh told him, trying her hardest to not say anything that would get him into more trouble. Jax sat back in his chair, placing his cuffed hands onto the cold table. "It doesn’t justify the things you have been doing to my brother… Juice doesn’t mean any harm Jax and you know that.“ Jax scoffed, looking across the room he replied back to her. "He betrayed the club. Everything I do to him is justifiable.” Shiloh placed her head in hands. She tried to control her tears but it was no use in trying. She looked up at Jax, him not bothering to even acknowledge her. "I can’t believe you right now! You were out to get him ever since her joined your fucking gang. What?! Step dad wasn’t showing you enough love, so you got jealous? Juice never did ANYTHING TO YOU JAX! BECAUSE OF YOU I HAVE NO ONE ANYMORE! All Juan ever wanted was for you to accept him, and you couldn’t even at least respect him.“ Shiloh lashed out. Jax looked down at his hands. "I don’t know what my brother did to deserve any of this. Running away from the club. People he once considered his brothers… Hell he was scared when you all found out he was half black, now you have a death wish on him. Can you imagine how he’s feeling right now?” Jax glared at her, “Juice’s feelings are not my problem anymore.” "Right! THERE MINE!“ She snapped back. "Why are you here?” He finally asked her. She wipped a tear away, “Im here because every day I have to live with the fact that I might never get to see my brother again. He was the only family I had left and because of YOU I’m all alone. I came here to tell you how much I hate you. How I wish that someone gets revenge for all the stupid shit you’ve been doing. I came here because I knew that if I kept wallowing in my pain, I might just act on the thoughts i’ve been having. That is why I came here. And to no suprise you don’t give a shit. You think you are some God and no one can hurt you. Well guess what, you aint shit. And the moment you realize that i will be standing right there. ” Jax didn’t know how to feel. He felt guilty for how he had made her feel. But he was loyal to his club, and there was no way he was going to give up that easy. "All I wanted was for you to say i’m sorry. Thats it.“ She cried. Jax looked away, he couldn’t look at her anymore. Shiloh shooked her head, angry she got up from the steal chair. She looked at him one more time. "Fuck you Jax.” Shiloh threw her chair back at the table, slamming the door as she left. Jax leaned back in his chair, running his hands through his hair. “Stop crying” he thought. “Stop crying..”
Reblog if you refrain from looking at pictures of Jefferey Dean Morgan and/or Andrew Lincoln in public places due to the utterly sexual sounds they evoke from you.
I know that I haven’t posted many things, only about 200 or so but I figured it might be helpful to make this so it’s easily accessible. If you’re on a phone or a tablet or really any technology other than a computer, this should be helpful.
This is my collection of original posts I’ve made that are intended to aide in your writing. This includes lists of synonyms for those words you constantly find on the tip of your tongue and masterposts of incredible resources you never would have thought you needed until you saw it.
I don’t post prompts too often, but when I do, they all show up numbered and ready to explore. I usually post either individual prompts or large lists with a common theme, so you can find quite a few here.
I’m don’t have a ton put into the studyblr side of my blog, perhaps I will later, but for now, the study-related posts can be found here.
These are all of my aesthetically pleasing posts in one handy spot so if you’re feeling stressed or need some inspiration you can scroll though it. It includes pictures, quotes, and collages that are nice looking and bound to light that creative spark in you.
Again, not much in this area yet but it will be expanding soon to showcase all of my favorite songs to write to and songs that I definitely recommend you listen to.
This is just the spot where you can find all of the asks I’ve answered and some mini posts I’ve made in response to followers’ questions.
And of course, you can always use these links to submit your own works, ask me any questions you like, or request posts you’d like to see.
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30 days of Nathan Maloney (8/30, feat. Jax Teller & Llyod Haythe)
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What sort of questions should I be asking my beta readers?
When I send out my chapter to be read over by my beta readers, I always include a set of questions typed out at the bottom, grouped into different categories such as: plot, pacing, character, setting, etc.
You might want to tailor the questions depending on the genre or which chapter it is. For example, if it’s the first chapter you’ll want to ask them about how well your story managed to hook them, or if they managed to easily get an idea of the world you’ve introduced them to. If it’s the climax you might want to ask if the action scenes are fluid, and if the plot twist/s were predictable or surprising.
Here’s some example questions that you could use:
What is your first impression of the main character? Do you find them likable? Annoying? Boring?
After reading it for the first time, what is your first impression? Was it cohesive and compelling? Boring and confusing?
Did the first sentence/paragraph/page efficiently grab your attention and hook you in?
If you were to read this chapter in a bookstore/library would you be convinced to buy it? Or would you need to read further before deciding? Why or why not?
Did you get oriented fairly quickly at the beginning as to whose story it is, what’s going on, and where and when it’s taking place? If not, what were you confused about at the beginning?
Does the first chapter establish the main character efficiently? Do they feel believable?
Could you clearly imagine what the characters looked like? If not, who?
Who was your favourite character and why? Has your favourite character changed? (if this hasn’t changed feel free to skip this question)
Are there any characters that you do not like? Why do you not like them? (Boring, annoying, problematic, etc.)
Was there ever a moment when you found yourself annoyed or frustrated by a character?
Could you relate to the main character? Did you empathise with their motivation or find yourself indifferent?
Were the characters goals/motivations clear and understandable?
Did you get confused about who’s who? Are there too many characters to keep track of? Are any of the names or characters too similar?
Do the characters feel three-dimensional or like cardboard cutouts?
How familiar have you become with the main characters? Without cheating could you name the four main characters? Can you remember their appearance? Can you remember their goal or motivation?
Did the dialogue seem natural to you?
Was there ever a moment where you didn’t know who was talking?
Were you able to visualize where and when the story is taking place?
Is the setting realistic and believable?
How well do you remember the setting? Without cheating, can you name four important settings?
Did anything about the story seem cliche or tired to you? How so?
Did anything you read (character, setting, etc.) remind you of any others works? (Books, movies, etc.)
Do you feel there were any unnecessary scenes/moments that deserved to be deleted or cut back?
Do the scenes flow naturally and comprehensively at an appropriate pace? Did you ever feel like they were jumping around the place?
Was there ever a moment where you attention started to lag, or the chapter begun to drag? Particular paragraph numbers would be very helpful.
Did you ever come across a sentence that took you out of the moment, or you had to reread to understand fully?
Was the writing style fluid and easy to read? Stilted? Purple prose-y? Awkward?
Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in facts, places, character details, plot, etc.?
What three things did you like? What three things did you not like?
Can you try predicting any upcoming plot twists or outcomes?
Was there ever a moment when your suspension of disbelief was tested?
Is there anything you’d personally change about the story?
Was the twist expected or surprising? Do you feel that the foreshadowing was almost nonexistent, or heavy handed?
Feel free to tailor these to your needs or ignore some of them if you don’t think they’re useful. Basically, your questions are about finding out the information about how others perceive your own writing and how you can improve your story.
-Lana
Some advice for when you’re writing and find yourself stuck in the middle of a scene:
kill someone
ask this question: “What could go wrong?” and write exactly how it goes wrong
switch the POV from your current character to another - a minor character, the antagonist, anyone
stop writing whatever scene you’re struggling with and skip to the next one you want to write
write the ending
write a sex scene
use a scene prompt
use sentence starters
read someone else’s writing
Never delete. Never read what you’ve already written. Pass Go, collect your $200, and keep going.