Liushen week day 3 prompt: AU
The AU here is not only that LQG dies but the fact that he got to spend his life with SQQ in the first place ayyyy
and also it was an accident. you will absolutely not make me feel bad about an accident
i will not apologize to my sibiling whos done the same thing to me and never apologized you hypocrite
i went to the dentist today and my dentist honest to god said “can i ask you a question…….what the hell is in your mouth”
The Untamed as text posts (63/?) the edition in which i’m not implying that jiang cheng is a peasant, but instead implying that he would rather die than participate in wei wuxian’s love affairs
look I know this looks like shit but I saw this tiktok and just. had to Jin Sibs it.
Mo Xuanyu loves this shit because he’s a gremlin who thrives off causing chaos.
Qin Su is in the weird position of being the JGS Bastard Elephant In The Room that the wider Jin family don’t really want to acknowledge, but also don’t want to upset in case she causes any more scandal, so for her, Jin family gatherings are low risk, high entertainment value.
Jin Zixuan struggles, because he was brought up to respect and care about the opinions of these people… but he also knows they’re awful… but he also hates drama and rocking the boat… but he also hates seeing his siblings treated shittily… mostly he is on Interrupt In A Loud And Timely Manner If People Are Being Assholes To Meng Yao duty
Meng Yao objectively has the worst time because he has basically designated himself the person who runs Interference for the siblings at gatherings, and he also really fucking hates confrontation, so does his best to keep the peace no matter how awful their relatives are to him… up until a point, when he’s exhausted enough not to give a shit anymore, and he retreats to a bathroom with a bottle of wine in each hand and his boyfriends on speed dial, and tells Xuanyu to do his worst.
more in this AU
Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
"Rolling Girl" Soos edition! Ft. Lee Soo Hyuk, Choi Jung Soo, Kim Rok Soo (and with a special appearance from Cale) TvT
(This is also uploaded to youtube! Special thanks to Soy for adding the music 🙏)
Loop/gif :
(And a few of my fav frames!) :
you weren’t a “well behaved” child you had anxiety and were terrified of conflict