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Dying
OMG I FINALLY GOT TIME TO SIT DOWN AND READ UR DEMO AND LEMME TELL U SOMETHING—
no but srsly tho that prologue was chef's kiss 😮💨
asdfghjkl THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON!
I’m so happy you enjoyed it! I hope you’ll find the next chapters just as enjoyable. <3
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Return home to Nipa Beach for the summer from college...and discover far more than you ever wanted to.
🌊 Meet your mother and old friends.
🌊 Try and fail to deal with your grief.
🌊 Meet a very adorable yellow tabby cat named Waffles and a loveable german shepherd named Luna!
🌊 Decide your past relationships. Did you have a partner that was tragically taken from you too soon? Or were you entangled in a now-failed friends-with-benefits relationship that's bitter with regret? Or neither!
This is the first part of Chapter One: The Beginning of the End. It currently sits at around 13,800 words.
As always, if you come across any errors or typos, feel free to send me some screenshots!
Currently have an appetite for Angst, so I want to order some suffering if you don't mind~. How would the RO's react if MC is dying in their arms after protecting them from a fatal attack? How would they cope after MC death? Thank you so much~~
I don’t mind at all angst is my forte. 😈
Aurelian:
Aurelian's heart raced as he held MC's limp body in his arms, the warmth of their blood seeping into his clothes.
He was in shock, screaming for MC and trying to push on the wound to stop the bleeding.
"No, no, no, this is NOT happening! MC! Talk to me!"
He felt like the world was moving too fast, with thoughts and emotions flowing through his mind.
MC's breath came in ragged gasps. "Aurelian," their voice barely a whisper, and Aurelian leaned in closer to hear them. "Thank you..."
Aurelian felt a lump in his throat as he looked at MC's fading eyes. He couldn't help the tears that streamed down his face.
"Don't speak," he whispered, his voice breaking. "You're going to be okay. I won't let you die." But even as he said those words, Aurelian knew they were a lie.
He tried to heal them, but MC's injuries were too severe, and there was nothing he could do to save them.
"Please don't leave me," he begged, his voice quivering in desperation. "I need you, MC. Please come back to me. I can't live without you."
MC's eyes closed for the final time.
Elara:
Elara always knew that this world was dangerous and that great risks lurked in the shadows. But she had never imagined that one day, she would be holding the almost lifeless body of MC.
Tears streamed down Elara's face as she cradled MC in her arms. "Why did you take this mission?" she whispered, her voice filled with anguish. "You knew the risks."
"I wish you had listened to me. I wish I could have protected you better," she continued, her voice cracking with emotion.
MC's eyes fluttered open, their gaze cloudy and unfocused. "Elara," they said weakly, blood flowing out of their mouth. "Don't blame yourself. This was my choice."
"No! It wasn't supposed to end like this. You were supposed to come back with me," she cried, her voice raw and broken.
MC's hand weakly reached up, touching Elara's cheek. "I'm sorry," they whispered.
Elara clutched MC's hand, her tears falling onto their skin. "Don't leave me," she pleaded. "Please, don't go. I love you."
MC smiled weakly, their eyes closing for the final time. Elara held them close, her heart shattering into a million pieces.
Kazuo:
Kazuo lay there as MC was dying in his arms, the blood on his hands and the tears streaming down his face a testament to the pain he felt.
"MC, please, please, it's going to be okay. You're going to be okay," he whispered, his body shaking uncontrollably.
MC's eyes were closed, and their breathing was shallow. Kazuo could feel their life slipping away, and he didn't know how to stop it.
He wanted to make it stop. He wanted the blood to stop flowing. He wanted everything to just stop.
"I'm sorry," MC managed to say between coughs. "I couldn't... protect you."
Kazuo's heart ached at those words. "What do you mean?! You saved me! You saved my life! And now I can't even save yours..." His voice broke and shook from pain.
MC's hand weakly reached up to hold his hand. "I'm glad... I'm..." Their breath grew even more labored, and their hand fell back to their side.
"No, no, no," he cried out. "Don't... don't. Please, speak to me."
But it was too late. MC's breathing stopped, and their hand went limp in Kazuo's grasp.
He let out a scream of agony.
He held MC's lifeless body tightly, not wanting to let go. "I love you," he whispered into MC's ear.
“I’ll always love you.”
Aiden/Ava:
A rushed over to MC and held them in their arms, their heart racing with fear. "Why did this happen? No, everything is going to be okay," A shakily rambled as they tried to stop the bleeding.
Soft, shallow breathing came from MC. They were fading fast. A was trembling with shock and denial. The wound was too severe, they had lost too much blood. They didn't know what to do.
Breaking them from their shock, a bloody hand was on their cheek. MC smiled weakly, their eyes filled with love and tears. "Thank you... for everything."
Tears streamed down A's face non-stop. They tried to speak, but their mouth was dry.
"You can't leave me. I love you. I love you so much," they managed to say.
But it was too late. MC's pulse stopped, and their hand went limp.
A's heart felt like it was being ripped out of their chest. They had never felt this much pain and emptiness.
"Why did you have to die?" A questioned, tears falling onto MC's skin.
They held MC's body tightly, feeling like they were holding onto the only thing left in the world that mattered.
I'm sorry. I'm sorry that I couldn't protect you. I'm sorry that I couldn't save you... I’m so sorry."
So, the two red flags are Aurelian and Soul Collector.
My favorite color happens to be red 🥰 (it's not, it's actually blue. I am a liar. And I love Aurelian)
What a coincidence! Same here! (I actually like brown. ;) And Aurelian can be very 🤏🥺)
You know...your really careful of hiding soul collector makes me curious on what you have in store for this IF👀. Also if everyday mc gives Ros a kiss in the cheek what if one day mc forgets about it how would the ros react about that?
I'm evil just like that. >:)
Aurelian: Ah, yes, we all know Aurelian is a spoiled child who craves attention and adoration like a cat craves tuna. If MC forgets to give him a kiss on the cheek, he'll likely pout, sulk, and sigh so loudly you'd think there was a hurricane outside. Meanwhile, MC may be confused by Aurelian's behavior ("what's up with him?" 🤨) but they will eventually realize what's going on and sneak around him to give him a quick peck on the cheek, even if he's crossing his arms and facing away from them.
Or, MC could choose to playfully tease Aurelian, which may lead to him becoming more upset and storming out of the room in a huff, while pouting. MC: snickering. >:)
Aurelian:
Elara: Elara will notice the absence of the kiss immediately. Her hand will go to her cheek, and she will look around in confusion. She will start thinking 'What happened? Are they okay?' and she will start pacing around the room.
And then, MC will burst into the room, with a sheepish expression on their face, hurrying over to her side. "I'm so sorry Elara." ( 😰)
She will smile warmly, taking MC's hand in hers. MC will sigh with relief, and will they lean in and give a soft kiss on her cheek, lingering for a moment longer than usual. Elara:
Kazuo: Kazuo and MC were in the middle of their training session, with sweat dripping down their forehead when they took a break. Kazuo being a sweet and understanding person, wouldn't mind if MC forget their daily kiss (such a sweet boi), however, as MC realized, they froze, feeling guilty for forgetting such an important part of their routine.
Noticing the hesitation on MC's face, Kazuo furrowed his brow and asked in concern. "Is something wrong?"
MC cleared their throat, embarrassed as they admitted, "Uh, I, forgot the kiss."
Kazuo chuckled and shook his head fondly, walking closer to MC and signaling to his cheek. MC leaned in and gave him a gentle kiss, feeling a surge of happiness when Kazuo's face lit up with a smile.
Kazuo:
Aiden/Ava: A would notice the absence of the kiss right away, I mean they get up every morning excited for it.
"MC" they whined (I can't with them 🥺), tugging on their sleeve. "Why didn't you give me my kiss?"
MC's heart melted at the sight of A's adorable pout. They would lean in and give A a soft kiss on the cheek, causing A's face to lit up with joy. But that wouldn't be enough for them. A would follow MC around like a lost puppy, demanding more kisses and snuggles, unwilling to let them out of their sight.
A demanding snuggles:
SC: SC eyes narrowed mischievously, and they looked around, a sly grin spreading across their face. "What's wrong?" their voice is laced with amusement. "Did you forget something, MC?"
MC froze, feeling a sense of dread was over them. They knew how sneaky SC could be, "No?..." they tried to sound oblivious.
SC was amused, they followed MC around, taunting them with snarky comments and snickering.
"Did you forget about me, MC?" their voice dripping with sarcasm. "I'm hurt. You wound me deeply."
MC rolled their eyes, they leaned in and gave them a quick kiss on the cheek, feeling a twinge of guilt for forgetting.
SC's eyes sparkled with mischief, and they reached out to grab MC's hand. "Don't worry, MC," their voice low and seductive. "I'll let you make it up to me later."
SC:
Joy | she/her Unshackled is an 18+ horror and fantasy interactive fiction wip. Nsfw asks are tagged #nsfw
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