and I’m torn.
On one hand, the attention to detail is breathtaking. Seton has fully immersed me in the 14th century, palaces and plagues and all. Geoffrey Chaucer’s brief appearances are delightful. The friendships Katherine forms with the other women in her life are a driving force for most of the first half of the book. Not to mention this gem:
“I am no duchess, no queen, but I have been your equal in love, for this I dare to tell you how I feel.”
On the other hand…
The romance.
I’m over two-hundred pages in, and Katherine just seems so miserable with John. They’ve barely had a conversation about something other than how they love each other…and I cannot stress how few meaningful interactions they have had leading up to their affair.
He comes onto her as soon as his wife—her friend—dies, then even stronger as her husband is dying.
And when they finally get together, he’s in talks to get married the entire time. Their “honeymoon” overlooks his future fiancee’s homeland.
He just steamrolls her hesitations and ignores how becoming his mistress decimates her sense of self-worth. And then he gives her his deceased wife’s ring as a symbol of their love!
Every declaration of love or step forward in their relationship involves her crying and hating herself and her situation, and he is infuriatingly oblivious.
I get that a book published in the 1950′s would have faced backlash if Katherine actively pursued John. And I’m sure the references to sex caused a scandal when it was first published…but I’d rather have the heroine enjoying the hero and their relationship than simply giving up.
Let’s hope the third-act break-up will lead to Katherine putting her foot down and John recognizing that she is his equal, not just in love, because right now, their “romance” reads less like a love story and more like harassment.