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The reason(Elsanna)
When the sun has fallen at 18.40
Kristoff and Anna are walking and now the street was full with gangster.
Anna: this is the best night ever, Kristoff. Thank you for bring me outside and walk around.(holding Kristoff's tightly)
Kristoff:(holding Anna's hand tightly back)don't mind it, Anna. You're welcome.
While they were walking, the gangster were spying on them.
Hans: watcha look at that. The cute couple who have enjoyed their honeymoon.
Hans begin to approach them.
Kristoff and Anna are launching and then...
Hans: hey cutey couple watcha doin? Have a nice honeymoon?
Anna: what do you want from us? Please go away from us.
Hans: oh, you want me to go away? okay. But first, Kristoff hold her!
Anna: WHAT!?he...hey Kristoff what are you doin? Hey please stop! Why do you do this to me? Have you betrayed me, Kristoff? This is what you want from me, after we have been honeymoon? Why Kristoff...why!?
Kristoff: i just want money, Anna. You know what? All this honeymoon, married, ring thingy. They're just a bullshit. And what i say if you're an extraordinary person. I think you like a genuine pig who desperate for love. You're an innocent person who new for love and you marry a person who already betray you. Such a pathetic person.
Anna:(crying) why Kristoff...why!?
Hans:(Wicked laugh) lets finish her off and fuck her. Kristoff, do your job!
Kristoff: you got it boss.
Kristoff is rubbing Anna's sensitive area while he is holding her chest.
Hans is licking Anna neck and body while he is holding her hips.
Anna:(struggling)(crying) please...somebody help me! Please!
Suddenly
Elsa:(hit Hans and Kristoff face in light speed)
Hans: who is he!?
Kristoff: i have no idea.
Elsa: well hello, Nasties.
Hans:Elsa.
Kristoff: such a coward woman!
Hans: what are you Going to do to this innocent girl, huh!? You never gonna save her.
Kristoff: yeah, what you Will do to this innocent girl, hey you coward!?(while he rubbing Anna's chest and play with it)
Elsa: you never gonna touch her ever again. You gonna pay for this.
Hans: you little!!!Kristoff, finish her off!!!
Kristoff: yes, Boss.
Elsa: you never catch me!
Kristoff: c'mere you little!
Hans: thats what you want it. Take this electric blast!
Elsa: you never gonna hit me with those electric thingy. Catch me if you can, nasty brat and you too nasty muscle brat.
Hans and Kristoff are annoyed.
Hans holding Anna hips and Kristoff holding Anna's chest.
Hans: this is the last chance, Elsa. If you're not come out, i'll kill this cutey girl extremely.
Kristoff: ill fuck her hardly until she dead.
Elsa is hiding in somewhere.
Elsa: what should i do now? I have to save Anna.
Suddenly Elsa come out from her disguise.
Elsa: okay, Nasty Brats. Thats what you want it. SHODOPHONE IPPITSOJOU! Shinken Red. Shiba Elsa, Mairu!(she pull the samurai sword and put it in her shoulder) okay guys. Lets finish this off.
Hans shoot Elsa with his electric blast while Kristoff turn into a Gedoshuu.
Hans: take this. Electric blast.
Kristoff:(running while he is trying to punch her) hiyaahhhh. Eat this big muscle, you little!
Elsa:(avoiding him)Shinkenmaru Kaen no mai!
Kristoff:(struggling)HAHHHHH its hot like burning fire!
Hans: you such a brat! Electric Lazer blast!!
Elsa:(avoid him) Rekkaidaizantou! Rekkaidaizantou Oozutsu mode! Kabuto Gorindan! Seibai!
Hans:(struggling) HAHHHHH!!
Hans and Kristoff are struggling and defeated.
Hans: you gonna pay for this Elsa. Kristoff, lets get out of here!
Kristoff: you got it, Boss.
Elsa is turning into an usual person again.
Elsa: finally. Oh yeah Anna!
Anna:(pass out)
Elsa: Anna, i'm sorry i have to break up with you. I don't know if this Will happen to us. I'm so sorry Anna(holding her body and cuddling close) i'll take you home Anna. Just hang in there, my love. You have been through this alone. Im sorry.
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Anna was at Elsa's home.
Anna:(open her eyes) where am i?
Elsa: good evening, Anna. How are you? Are you already good. You can sleep in my room for two days. I permit it. Its okay.
Anna:(shocked)(cuddling Elsa tightly) Elsa. Oh Elsa. I'm so sorry. i have been wrong all these time. I have been in love with person who has betrayed me except with person who has been care for me so much. I'm so sorry Elsa.
Elsa: that okay Anna. After all, this is my fault. I shouldnt break up with you. I'm such a narrow-minded. I'm so sorry.
Anna: its okay, Elsa. You don't have to be like that. I know and i understand. And anyway, why did you break up with me?
Elsa: about that i'll tell you sooner. The important thing now is you're safe from that nasty Brats.
Anna: okay, Elsa.
(continue)
The reason(Elsanna)
When the sun has fallen at 18.40
Kristoff and Anna are walking and now the street was full with gangster.
Anna: this is the best night ever, Kristoff. Thank you for bring me outside and walk around.(holding Kristoff's tightly)
Kristoff:(holding Anna's hand tightly back)don't mind it, Anna. You're welcome.
While they were walking, the gangster were spying on them.
Hans: watcha look at that. The cute couple who have enjoyed their honeymoon.
Hans begin to approach them.
Kristoff and Anna are launching and then...
Hans: hey cutey couple watcha doin? Have a nice honeymoon?
Anna: what do you want from us? Please go away from us.
Hans: oh, you want me to go away? okay. But first, Kristoff hold her!
Anna: WHAT!?he...hey Kristoff what are you doin? Hey please stop! Why do you do this to me? Have you betrayed me, Kristoff? This is what you want from me, after we have been honeymoon? Why Kristoff...why!?
Kristoff: i just want money, Anna. You know what? All this honeymoon, married, ring thingy. They're just a bullshit. And what i say if you're an extraordinary person. I think you like a genuine pig who desperate for love. You're an innocent person who new for love and you marry a person who already betray you. Such a pathetic person.
Anna:(crying) why Kristoff...why!?
Hans:(Wicked laugh) lets finish her off and fuck her. Kristoff, do your job!
Kristoff: you got it boss.
Kristoff is rubbing Anna's sensitive area while he is holding her chest.
Hans is licking Anna neck and body while he is holding her hips.
Anna:(struggling)(crying) please...somebody help me! Please!
Suddenly
Elsa:(hit Hans and Kristoff face in light speed)
Hans: who is he!?
Kristoff: i have no idea.
Elsa: well hello, Nasties.
Hans:Elsa.
Kristoff: such a coward woman!
Hans: what are you Going to do to this innocent girl, huh!? You never gonna save her.
Kristoff: yeah, what you Will do to this innocent girl, hey you coward!?(while he rubbing Anna's chest and play with it)
Elsa: you never gonna touch her ever again. You gonna pay for this.
Hans: you little!!!Kristoff, finish her off!!!
Kristoff: yes, Boss.
Elsa: you never catch me!
Kristoff: c'mere you little!
Hans: thats what you want it. Take this electric blast!
Elsa: you never gonna hit me with those electric thingy. Catch me if you can, nasty brat and you too nasty muscle brat.
Hans and Kristoff are annoyed.
Hans holding Anna hips and Kristoff holding Anna's chest.
Hans: this is the last chance, Elsa. If you're not come out, i'll kill this cutey girl extremely.
Kristoff: ill fuck her hardly until she dead.
Elsa is hiding in somewhere.
Elsa: what should i do now? I have to save Anna.
Suddenly Elsa come out from her disguise.
Elsa: okay, Nasty Brats. Thats what you want it. SHODOPHONE IPPITSOJOU! Shinken Red. Shiba Elsa, Mairu!(she pull the samurai sword and put it in her shoulder) okay guys. Lets finish this off.
Hans shoot Elsa with his electric blast while Kristoff turn into a Gedoshuu.
Hans: take this. Electric blast.
Kristoff:(running while he is trying to punch her) hiyaahhhh. Eat this big muscle, you little!
Elsa:(avoiding him)Shinkenmaru Kaen no mai!
Kristoff:(struggling)HAHHHHH its hot like burning fire!
Hans: you such a brat! Electric Lazer blast!!
Elsa:(avoid him) Rekkaidaizantou! Rekkaidaizantou Oozutsu mode! Kabuto Gorindan! Seibai!
Hans:(struggling) HAHHHHH!!
Hans and Kristoff are struggling and defeated.
Hans: you gonna pay for this Elsa. Kristoff, lets get out of here!
Kristoff: you got it, Boss.
Elsa is turning into an usual person again.
Elsa: finally. Oh yeah Anna!
Anna:(pass out)
Elsa: Anna, i'm sorry i have to break up with you. I don't know if this Will happen to us. I'm so sorry Anna(holding her body and cuddling close) i'll take you home Anna. Just hang in there, my love. You have been through this alone. Im sorry.
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Anna was at Elsa's home.
Anna:(open her eyes) where am i?
Elsa: good evening, Anna. How are you? Are you already good. You can sleep in my room for two days. I permit it. Its okay.
Anna:(shocked)(cuddling Elsa tightly) Elsa. Oh Elsa. I'm so sorry. i have been wrong all these time. I have been in love with person who has betrayed me except with person who has been care for me so much. I'm so sorry Elsa.
Elsa: that okay Anna. After all, this is my fault. I shouldnt break up with you. I'm such a narrow-minded. I'm so sorry.
Anna: its okay, Elsa. You don't have to be like that. I know and i understand. And anyway, why did you break up with me?
Elsa: about that i'll tell you sooner. The important thing now is you're safe from that nasty Brats.
Anna: okay, Elsa.
(continue)