Stronger Than You - Blog Posts

Earlier I posted about a Chujin “stronger than you” parody. So I made it (CROWD CHEERS)

I am not experienced at writing lyrics or audio/video editing so this may be janky, but hey, it’s funny

“Now you look like me! ... kinda”

so precious these two

I’ve made one for each game lol

I’m writing a parody of Stronger than You with Clover and I need help.

I’m reposting this to Tumblr to see if the Tumblrinas have any advice. I’m writing a parody right now of Stronger than you with Clover. It will be for the Genocide route for the fight against Martlet. Anyway I have two versions of a line and I don’t know which one to go with.

The line is replacing,

“I am their mercy,

I am their vengeance,

I am determination.”

For the version I’m working on, Clover will be referring to Monster kind, as opposed to people they care about like Sans did.

Version A is:

“I am their Judgement,

I am their Reaper,

I am their Condemnation,”

Version B is:

“I am their Judgement,

I am their Reaper,

I am their Retribution,”

I know it’s only one word, but the power of that last line is what I consider to be the most powerful line in the whole song, so I NEED to get it right.

I originally picked the word “Condemnation” because it rhymes with “determination,” no one ever uses that word anymore, and it has a double meaning. It could mean Clover is condemning the monsters for their actions, AND that they’re condemning them to a life forever trapped in the underground because they’re taking the human souls when they leave.

But then I listened to the Undertale Yellow song “retribution,” and started having second thoughts. Retribution also fits well in the same spot and if I use it, it will be referring to Clover’s retribution against the monsters and be a fun song reference.

I LIKE BOTH FOR DIFFERENT REASONS. Which one should I use?