no need to answer all of them if you don’t want to, but here!! 🧩 🥤 🌿 🏜️
🧩 ⇢ what will make you click away from a fanfiction immediately?
Grammar and format! A few mistakes here and there are totally fine, I've definitely noticed mistakes in my own works lol, but when it becomes distracting? Then we have a problem.
🥤 ⇢ recommend an author or fanfic you love
Well, there's the supremely talented syntheticpen (😉).
Newly unmoored in the Scottish countryside, Eloise decides a letter to Bloomsbury is in order.
Here's a few more (off the top of my head):
Theo and Eloise meet as children, while his father sells books to hers. Despite their differences in station and the way that life does not work out too well for Theo, they can't be kept apart. Eloise is far too determined for that.
It is their wedding night and Theo comes up with a way to calm a nervous Eloise, with the help of a certain poet he knows she loves.
When Benedict finds his sister in the library at a ball, dress torn, bloodied letter knife in hand, he knows he will do anything he can to help her. And if anything involves finishing off the villain who has tried to harm her and then fleeing with her in the night, then that is what he shall do.
🌿 ⇢ give some advice on writer's block and low creativity
Lol you are asking the wrong person, but I'll try to answer anyway! I think outlining is really important: the more detailed, the better. This way, when you're writing, there's very little decision-making involved, you're just focusing on executing the scene. Personally, for dialogue-heavy scenes, I like to write a script instead of a more traditional outline.
But, yeah, all of this is easier said than done lol. (🤡)
🏜️ ⇢ what's your favourite type of comment to receive on your work?
I love all comments! I think my favourite comments are the ones that mention what exactly they liked about the chapter, and I usually try to leave those comments myself.
Thanks for the ask! <3
secured a software dev internship IN THIS ECONOMY
The coppery scent of blood filled her senses, choking her with its sharp, metallic bitterness. The grass beneath her was stained with fresh blood, dark and glistening under the dim lamplight. Every breath she took seemed to draw more of that metallic bitterness into her lungs, making it impossible to escape the reality of what had occurred.
Murder.
The air hummed around Eloise as she shakily reached for her phone, her bloody fingers staining the case red.
There was only one person she wanted to call.
“I need your help,” she said, the words paining her to say.
“Like, with homework?”
Eloise glanced down at the body of George Morrison, a cold chill running down her spine. “Sure. Homework.”
this mf aint even looking at the fuckin pamphlet ....... 🙄
Here is a Prelude To Ecstasy snippet, because I'm bored lol:
"Rest assured, I shall endeavour to match your level of propriety—nothing more, nothing less," interrupted Eloise, her eyes gleaming with mischief. Benedict did not appear at all reassured by this.
I’m a firm believer in "brevity is the soul of wit" which is why I refuse to read any book that is over 400 pages long.
dair parallels (144/?)
Gossip Girl 2x18 // Gossip Girl 4x17
eloise and benedict's faces when fran got shy about kissing john in front of an audience 🤣
current hyperfixation: eloise bridgerton and theo sharpemina | she/her | 21
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