“i don’t know why people think it isn’t helly. it’s helly.” adam scott being totally done with all the nonsensical takes is why i love him (x)
In case anyone cares, I recently (minorly) rewrote The Manuscript! No drastic changes were made (the changes are mostly related to dialogue), and most people probably won't even notice a difference lol. I thought I would still list the most changed scenes, in case anyone is curious.
Chapter 1: Library (second vignette).
Chapter 2: Drunk call (first vignette).
Chapter 3: Morning after (seventh vignette).
I think Eloise as we see her needs to be with someone who cares about rights for women and causes as much as she does. The Eloise we see in the show would not be content with someone who merely tolerates her activism or is generally disinterested these causes, and only cares about them through her.
As well as that, this Eloise doesn’t belong in the country, safe and tucked away quietly in a manor house. She doesn’t belong in posh London society either. Where she belongs is the political meetings such as where she ran into Theo. Amongst people who challenge her and challenge the world. She would belong in intellectual salons and the bohemian world where Benedict has made a space for himself.
She belongs where the action is, where the crowds are gathering and are laying the foundations for a change in the world. That is where she belongs, and she belongs with someone who would stand beside her and match her as she marches, step by step.
I feel like every time I come on here to post a snippet…it’s for a new WIP. 😭
I'm on a gg/dair renaissance and I blame you entirely 😂😂😂
LMAO I will gladly accept the blame! Also, Dair is literally Modern Theloise so the renaissance was bound to happen eventually. 😅
current hyperfixation: eloise bridgerton and theo sharpemina | she/her | 21
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